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8 years 4 months ago - 8 years 4 months ago #1 by Schol-R-LEA
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    • I am still working on these, but if anyone wants to point me towards any I may have missed, or have any comments on them so far, please feel free to speak up.

    I am concerned that I am taking the idea of an 'origin story' too broadly in some cases. I am also trying to think of how best to organize them so that it is not just a long list of story links, as it is now.
    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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    • I just noticed that I forgot to set it to "Request for Review". It should be visible for reviewers now.
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    8 years 4 months ago - 8 years 4 months ago #3 by Esar
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    • We are not allowed to post too many links in one message (5 max it seems) so I am going to trim my post and separate it in several messages.

    - Elle : Part 1
    - Esoteric : A tenuous blade
    - Danny : Kayda 8 - The Best Days of Our Lives Part 1
    - Glow : Part 1
    - Charge : Part 1
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    • - Shine : Rise'n Shine
    - Knockoff : Mama's boy
    - Roulette : Part 1
    - Camille : Part 1
    8 years 4 months ago - 8 years 4 months ago #5 by Esar
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    • - Ribbon : Steel Ribbon
    - Petra : Part 1
    - Gotterdammerung and Sunshine: The problem with power

    I hope this is what you were looking for.
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    8 years 4 months ago #6 by Valentine
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    • Schol-R-LEA wrote: I am still working on these, but if anyone wants to point me towards any I may have missed, or have any comments on them so far, please feel free to speak up.

    I am concerned that I am taking the idea of an 'origin story' too broadly in some cases. I am also trying to think of how best to organize them so that it is not just a long list of story links, as it is now.


    You might want to rename that as "Introduction" stories. Many of them aren't really "Origins," but introductions. A Single Fold and The Big Idea, neither show where the characters came from, but only big changes in their lives.
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    8 years 4 months ago #7 by Sir Lee
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    • Also, Petra 1 is hardly her "origin" story -- rather, it's her first solo story after Circuit Breaker was split into Paige and Petra.
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    8 years 4 months ago #8 by E. E. Nalley
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    • Also, don't forget Tansy's heel face turn beginning in A Pocketful of Tansy.
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    8 years 4 months ago #9 by Malady
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    8 years 4 months ago #10 by Schol-R-LEA
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    • OK, I've added quite a bit to this today, so if anyone wants to take a look please let me know if there is anything more to add or fix.
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    8 years 4 months ago #11 by E. E. Nalley
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    • E. E. Nalley wrote: Also, don't forget Tansy's heel face turn beginning in A Pocketful of Tansy.

    I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
    Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
    8 years 4 months ago #12 by Schol-R-LEA
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    • Gotcha. I listed both that and "Bottle a Jinn" for her under "The Alphas".
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    8 years 4 months ago #13 by cprime
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    • I was looking through the document and noticed that 'Shine is listed under 'Other Whateley Students', where he should be listed under 'Expected Arrivals in Fall 2007'. Other than this, this looks like a fairly comprehensive list. Thanks for your efforts.
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    8 years 4 months ago #14 by cprime
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    • Another Year 2 student to add is Pounce (Charging Buffalo, Hidden Dragon):
    whateleyacademy.net/index.php/original-t...hidden-dragon-part-1
    whateleyacademy.net/index.php/original-t...hidden-dragon-part-2
    whateleyacademy.net/index.php/original-t...hidden-dragon-part-3
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    8 years 4 months ago #15 by Valentine
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    Imp: First Imp-ressions
    Melvin "Hotrod" Donner and Gunny Bardue: The Secret of the Forger's List (Chapter 4)

    Fall 2007
    Mischief: Mission Imp-probable (Part 2)
    Porcelain: ???

    Other Students
    Aquerna: Never Look a Gift Squirrel in the Mouth
    Hazmat: Straight from the Squirrel’s Mouth (Chapter 1)
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    8 years 4 months ago #16 by annachie
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    • cprime wrote: I was looking through the document and noticed that 'Shine is listed under 'Other Whateley Students', where he should be listed under 'Expected Arrivals in Fall 2007'. Other than this, this looks like a fairly comprehensive list. Thanks for your efforts.


    Been a while but I didn't think Shine had any dating to him.
    8 years 4 months ago #17 by cprime
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    • The last date stamp in Shine is 'July, 2007'. During the section, Shine receives his rejection letter from Whateley and appeals his rejection letter. It is implied that he joins the school the following fall.
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    8 years 1 month ago #18 by Malady
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    • So, on the Standalone Starting Points, I wonder if crystalhall.wikia.com/wiki/Garafena_(Story) would fit... Garafena

    Or Catgirl Madness ? ... Basically, anything that doesn't tie into a larger plotline would fit on there?

    Steel Ribbon , Roulette , and the other origin stories might also go there as well? 'Cause they don't knowledge of prequels to make sense? Even though they do lead into further stories, now?

    ... Basically, I've just been looking through the Wiki list of Stories and seeing which ones pop to mind when I think "You don't need to know any other stories to get this one", but my assessment might be off?
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