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Question Exchange Student Discussion

8 years 2 months ago #1 by DonTZ125
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    • Exchange Student is a Buffy the Vampire Slayer cross-over that I'm also posting at Twisting the Hellmouth.

    This is far and away the longest thing I have ever written, and I would be grateful for any feedback and critiquing.
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    8 years 2 months ago #2 by DonTZ125
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    • Chapter 5 is now up; Marta tries WAY to hard, and suffers some painful consequences ...


    (150+ hits, and no comments?! Does it suck so badly?? :S )

    (There's no 'Waaahhh' smiley ... ;) )
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    8 years 2 months ago - 8 years 2 months ago #3 by Malady
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    • Hmm... I'm saving it for later... And I need to get to the page to do so, I have other things to do, but it does seem interesting, so there's that.

    Try linking from your Sig and linking back to here, from the story? and linking from this thread (Oh, you already did that.)
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    My Patreon. But, support the Crystal Hall 1st?
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    8 years 2 months ago #4 by DonTZ125
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    • Both links added - thanks for the suggestion!
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