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8 years 4 weeks ago #1 by Yolandria
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  • What a mouthful! But here we go!

    Put your comments in the section below!

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    8 years 4 weeks ago - 8 years 4 weeks ago #2 by Malady
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  • Well, the other thread... Which is now gone for some reason, said it was a spoilers? story...

    And musing on that spoiler while away... Makes me think it might be

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    ... My gods... How many threads are there?? ... whateleyacademy.net/index.php/forum/spec...-101-story-arcs/1728
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    8 years 4 weeks ago #3 by elrodw
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  • One item you'll note - this is the first time I've included images. My muse got stuck, so I decided to play with GIMP to see if I could make the medal I describe. I thought it came out okay (Astrodragon says it looks like a Soviet medal, but what does he know!) And the ending image kind of says it all, and names some of the SFL members. If you'd been paying attention to the changes in the Wiki, you'd have seen that I edited the SFL page to add names, but didn't have a description of what happened.

    It worked - after I did that, my muse was happy again, despite how this story went. I was going for the "Greek tragedy" style. May have worked, maybe not.

    And now you know the context of the 'spoiler' I posted a few weeks ago, which someone guessed the meaning of. Should have known this community would do that - y'all are pretty observant.

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    8 years 4 weeks ago - 8 years 4 weeks ago #4 by E!
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    My face after reading it all the way through.

    Still a great story thanks elrodw!
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    8 years 4 weeks ago #5 by Katssun
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  • This story is dense to the point that poor Dreamer will be writing a dissertation, not the usual essay!

    I laughed, I got misty-eyed. Let me see if I can get some highlights out of the way:
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    This is still a lot to process...
    8 years 4 weeks ago #6 by JG
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  • Huh. This one did not show up as published for me.
    8 years 4 weeks ago #7 by Kristin Darken
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  • JG wrote: Huh. This one did not show up as published for me.

    It's in the "Newest 2nd Gen Stories" not the Original Timeline list, Joe.

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    8 years 4 weeks ago #8 by Yolandria
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  • He's kinda slow sometimes. :P

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    8 years 4 weeks ago #9 by Valentine
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  • I'll start at an unusual place. I think you got the politicians right. They gave medals to the heroes, but didn't give them to the people that deserved them. The National Guard that did their best, despite having no chance. Kayda's guard that ran to the fight, knowing how badly they were screwed. Kayda's "handmaidens" that saved countless lives by getting people away from the fight.

    I guess we will have to wait for the next Laura story to find out what happened with the healing, and maybe with Val. (I object to the harming of characters named Val.)

    A politically unified First Nations should scare the powers in charge. I wonder what the opinion of them is pertaining Native Hawaiians, Guamians(?), Samoans, etc. is?

    Uncehgila finally got free, and it took a hell of a lot to stop him. This does bring up one thing that I have always disliked about comics and the way most of my friends run superhero games. When facing a potentially cataclysmic foe, why don't people call for support?

    Kayda didn't have a chance, Lanie eventually did, but what was the SFL thinking? Admittedly none of the "nearby" teams, those in the Rockies, and Chicago area, are close enough to get there in time to help unless they have access to a teleporter, but if everything goes bad at least they are on the way. ARC has powered armor troops in orbit, presumably with the same sort of defenses as the HPARC armor had, but no one called them? Or Whateley? Someone is going to have clean the are, and it's likely to be ARC, with some help from Whateley.

    Sorry but that is a pet peeve of mine.

    It was a hell of a battle, and I wonder if we will ever find out if Catapult (was he in Absinthe II?) recovers. But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe. It's even likely that the Range Team would have steered him away from the tactic.

    Overall a "good" story, well written and all that, but not particularly pleasant.

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    8 years 4 weeks ago #10 by Katssun
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  • Valentine wrote: But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe. It's even likely that the Range Team would have steered him away from the tactic.

    It's somewhat scary that Carson knew he was capable of doing it, and encouraged the tactic almost nonchalantly. She's been running Lanie and Kayda though extradimensional horror gauntlets, so they're familiar with this kind of thing. Still, Carson has a good sense of how to combat Class X entities.

    Really makes you wonder, given how relatively cool she was fighting Unhcy, what in the Whateley tunnels took her and the board members?
    8 years 4 weeks ago #11 by elrodw
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  • I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.

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    8 years 4 weeks ago #12 by Dreamer
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  • SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.


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    8 years 4 weeks ago #13 by Katssun
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  • elrodw wrote: I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.

    I can't speak for the rest of us, but I was frankly a bit numb by that point.

    The phone call to Brigette and the followup discussion with whoever was left hit me the hardest. The absences were keenly felt.
    8 years 4 weeks ago #14 by elrodw
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  • Katssun wrote:

    elrodw wrote: I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.

    I can't speak for the rest of us, but I was frankly a bit numb by that point.

    The phone call to Brigette and the followup discussion with whoever was left hit me the hardest. The absences were keenly felt.


    I had to write it in sections to avoid overloading myself, even though I knew what was happening and going to happen. And if I read it, parts still choke me up.

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    8 years 4 weeks ago #15 by mhalpern
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  • Katssun wrote:

    Valentine wrote: But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe. It's even likely that the Range Team would have steered him away from the tactic.

    It's somewhat scary that Carson knew he was capable of doing it, and encouraged the tactic almost nonchalantly. She's been running Lanie and Kayda though extradimensional horror gauntlets, so they're familiar with this kind of thing. Still, Carson has a good sense of how to combat Class X entities.

    Really makes you wonder, given how relatively cool she was fighting Unhcy, what in the Whateley tunnels took her and the board members?

    Well all things considered, i think we can rule Sara out now, she is younger, and wouldn't necessarily be as powerful as Daddy Snake, so I am betting some sort of temporal anomaly or something. and it isn't a matter of where they are but rather WHEN they are

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    8 years 4 weeks ago #16 by Valentine
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  • elrodw wrote: I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.


    I think that knowing already that the SFL had broken up blunted the impact.

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    8 years 4 weeks ago - 8 years 4 weeks ago #17 by Arcanist Lupus
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  • The story with this little bit is now completed and at my editors for cleanup, then it's in the queue.
    BTW, it's a Gen 2 story.

    I suppose that that's technically true...

    elrodw wrote: I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.

    It's impactful, but in a quiet contemplative way that doesn't lend itself well to sharing. At least, that's what it was like for me.

    By shear coincidence, my music was playing The Highwayman as I reached the conclusion here. The subject matter is different, but I felt that it set the mood quite well.

    When facing a potentially cataclysmic foe, why don't people call for support?

    I'd say that there's a number of related reasons. At the core I'd say that the problem is isolation. The Sioux Falls League was a highly competent team covering a fairly large area on their own. They would rarely have the opportunity or the necessity to deal with other teams. This means three things. First is that when they're rushing into a fight at full speed they simply don't have the instinct to call for other teams. Secondly, without a strong working relationship with the other teams, they're probably not going to be able to mobilize them rapidly. We saw the difficulty Ernst had dealing with the general. While getting another team to help probably wouldn't be pulling teeth like that was, it's not as simple as flying a Batsignal. Finally, they might not be aware of how prepared the other teams are for dealing with a Class X threat. Unless you know that the other teams have the defenses to not be instantly mind-wiped and the strength to deal Snakey damage then all you're doing is getting a team of good people killed and stripping an area of its heroes to buy you a little bit of cannon fodder. Heck, I'm amazed that they let Catapult join them. I'm guessing that if they'd had a little bit more time to consider, or if he had anything other than a blisteringly powerful long-range powerset, he would have stayed behind.

    Katssun wrote: Really makes you wonder, given how relatively cool she was fighting Unhcy, what in the Whateley tunnels took her and the board members?

    It's unlikely that what-ever-it-was in the tunnels was a chump. But that doesn't necessarily mean that it was as powerful as Snakey in a cage match. Here, Carson had the benefit of knowing that she was walking into a foxtrot before she got there. All it takes is the right attack coming from an angle that she hadn't anticipated and catching her flatfooted, and poof. As Eldritch said, "Always fear the lucky idiot with a gun. He may be an idiot, but he's still lucky and he has a gun." Heck, we don't even know if what got them was a thing at all! For all we know the tunnels shifted from the strain of being bent through non-Euclidean space, and Carson and the board simply got caught in a pocket section separated from real space.

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    8 years 4 weeks ago #18 by Valentine
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  • Arcanist Lupus wrote:

    When facing a potentially cataclysmic foe, why don't people call for support?

    I'd say that there's a number of related reasons. At the core I'd say that the problem is isolation. The Sioux Falls League was a highly competent team covering a fairly large area on their own. They would rarely have the opportunity or the necessity to deal with other teams. This means three things. First is that when they're rushing into a fight at full speed they simply don't have the instinct to call for other teams. Secondly, without a strong working relationship with the other teams, they're probably not going to be able to mobilize them rapidly. We saw the difficulty Ernst had dealing with the general. While getting another team to help probably wouldn't be pulling teeth like that was, it's not as simple as flying a Batsignal. Finally, they might not be aware of how prepared the other teams are for dealing with a Class X threat. Unless you know that the other teams have the defenses to not be instantly mind-wiped and the strength to deal Snakey damage then all you're doing is getting a team of good people killed and stripping an area of its heroes to buy you a little bit of cannon fodder. Heck, I'm amazed that they let Catapult join them. I'm guessing that if they'd had a little bit more time to consider, or if he had anything other than a blisteringly powerful long-range powerset, he would have stayed behind.


    There are extenuating circumstances, here. First the SFL is known for interning new heroes. Both Catapult, and Valerie were interns. So they would have contacts amongst other teams. Second, the primaryback up plan is to nuke the area. You're going to want some emergency back up to deal with that, and South Dakota just lost a bunch of its National Guard. Third, it's not like Uncehgila is a new or unknown threat, I would hope that various heroes would know about the threat and that it's been trying to escape for years.

    Like I said though, it's a pet peeve of mine.

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    8 years 4 weeks ago #19 by null0trooper
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  • Valentine wrote: It was a hell of a battle, and I wonder if we will ever find out if Catapult (was he in Absinthe II?) recovers. But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe. It's even likely that the Range Team would have steered him away from the tactic.


    Consider the hard x-ray radiation from matter being heated up as it falls in: probably not an effect that's very welcome on the Ranges (just ask Tennyo!). It could be that data from powers testing and the simulators had been extrapolated to "this kid could maybe pull that off", followed by "What do we do then?"

    I suspect that the remainder of the simulation results translated to: "You're asking a kid straight out of high school to warp space into a topology that makes reality cry. Unless their name is Sara Waite, Joshette Gillman, or Ecila Mason, they might need a lot of quiet time to recover." Even if that isn't a problem, he's still just found out that if he loses his grip on his sanity and his powers he could potentially eradicate the planet.

    Katssun wrote: Really makes you wonder, given how relatively cool she was fighting Unhcy, what in the Whateley tunnels took her and the board members?


    Maybe the pocket dimension's containment field started failing, and oops, Daddy Unhce's been busy with the Class X spawning features?

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  • Malady wrote: Well, the other thread... Which is now gone for some reason, said it was a spoilers?


    It got moderated, someone hadn't seen that the story had been released and thought that I had found the story through illegitimate means. On second thought I put the Kayda tag as a spoiler because I hadn't read it yet and I didn't want someone to read the first message and then be spoiled an eventual surprise in case the fact that it was a kayda story wasn't something they were expecting (I wasn't expecting a Kayda Gen2 story).

    So now that I have read it, I can reiterate my thanks to you Elrodw.

    For some reason I hadn't immediatly picked up on the fact that it was a flashback, so it was strange for a moment. (and I am too ashamed to admit at which point in the story I realized it.) It was very emotional, I particularly liked the public speech scene.
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  • Speaking of music to read by, either "One for my Baby (and one more for the road)" or Vangelis' "Blade Runner Blues" could well accompany the last SFL HQ scene. YMMV.

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    8 years 4 weeks ago - 8 years 4 weeks ago #22 by Kettlekorn
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  • Oh man, the governor's speech. "Let us recognize that several decades ago, the state, recognizing that it had not recognized that it was inadequately recognizing its lack of recognition for those who sacrificed for the public good, recognized that it should authorize and design a special recognition for this recognition of its inadequate recognition of its lack of recognition..." :P

    What I'm hoping gets recognized, however, is the importance of distributed battery backups and/or close-on-failure doors in emergency lockdown systems. It's understandable to skimp on that for a small structure, but with a stretched out massively deep containment facility for Big Baddies like this? Criminal negligence. I mean, I get that the original design for the place probably tunnel-visioned on keeping things in and forgot to account for what happens if a higher level gets wiped out first to decapitate the lower levels, but by this point they've known for at least four years that Snake-Daddy had powerful outside help trying to bust in and should have corrected that oversight.

    But hey, that oversight only cost them several hundred lives. Live and learn, right?

    I'm also a bit surprised that they left Louie's tunnel unfilled. Maybe we'll see what's up with that in the ongoing Gen1 Kayda stories. I'm guessing they were leaving it there it as a trap.

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    Oh jeez.

    Valentine wrote: But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe.

    I disagree. It's a pretty natural thing to think of if you have gravity based powers that can apply absurd g-forces. It's just the bread-and-butter technique of crushing your enemies with gravity taken to the extreme.

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  • Kettlekorn wrote:

    Valentine wrote: But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe.

    I disagree. It's a pretty natural thing to think of if you have gravity based powers that can apply absurd g-forces. It's just the bread-and-butter technique of crushing your enemies with gravity taken to the extreme.

    Monica apparently generates them in mid-air routinely as part of her fighting techniques, but she certainly doesn't do it inside people. From what we've seen, she's generally pretty scared of what direct application of her power does to things and people.

    Misty...she certainly goes way too far when she's in a panic berserk state, but I don't think she can make black holes.
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  • Of course Monica doesn't make blackholes inside the people she spars with. That has no bearing on whether or not it would occur to her to try with an enemy she's willing to kill.

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  • Katssun wrote:

    Kettlekorn wrote:

    Valentine wrote: But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe.

    I disagree. It's a pretty natural thing to think of if you have gravity based powers that can apply absurd g-forces. It's just the bread-and-butter technique of crushing your enemies with gravity taken to the extreme.

    Monica apparently generates them in mid-air routinely as part of her fighting techniques, but she certainly doesn't do it inside people. From what we've seen, she's generally pretty scared of what direct application of her power does to things and people.

    Misty...she certainly goes way too far when she's in a panic berserk state, but I don't think she can make black holes.


    Neither does Tennyo, even though she can make them.

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  • Regards filling in the tunnel from sonny 3: tunneling to fill that in would probably MEET sonny-boy 3, which would be a bad thing for the tunnelers. He was stopped, and it might be believed that with a year or more with no (detectable) activity, and with the reinforcements and probably some higher priorities (and probably budget constraints), it's all too realistic IMHO that the tunnel went unfilled.

    Regards calling in others - they knew that sonny's gaze was bad ganja; if Don hadn't made enough devisor goggles, then calling in heavy reinforcements wouldn't do much good. If they gazed at him, they're toast. He took a Hellfire missile without blinking. And up until someone actually encountered him, no-one had any idea of how much more bad-ass Uncy was than his little boys. They found the answer - a HELL of a lot more bad-ass.

    There's another factor at work here. It was 4 years from the last activity of Uncy-junior. Despite best awareness and training, that's time for people to lose their edge about a particular potential threat. would they have made plans in 07? Yes. How relevant are those in '11? Unsure, if anyone can even find them. Teams they had arrangements with? May be changed, or disbanded, or something like that. Remember - time is the enemy of preparedness.

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  • Are there so many creators of this class breaking out of containment that the president is not informed immediately? I am thinking that it would be a good idea to start sending out advisory notices as soon as something like this starts to break containment. Start calling in super teams and or groups trained for something like this a soon as it looks like it will escape.

    Edit. If needs of the story overcome what looks like being smart I can understand. elrodw{s post above was made while I was making this post.
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  • elrodw wrote:

    Katssun wrote:

    elrodw wrote: I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.

    I can't speak for the rest of us, but I was frankly a bit numb by that point.

    The phone call to Brigette and the followup discussion with whoever was left hit me the hardest. The absences were keenly felt.


    I had to write it in sections to avoid overloading myself, even though I knew what was happening and going to happen. And if I read it, parts still choke me up.


    *slowpoke mode enabled*

    I hadn't even made the connection between the title and the last scene. Congrats Elrodw.
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  • Kettlekorn wrote:

    Valentine wrote: But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe.

    I disagree. It's a pretty natural thing to think of if you have gravity based powers that can apply absurd g-forces. It's just the bread-and-butter technique of crushing your enemies with gravity taken to the extreme.


    Phrasing it that way reminds me of Mass Effect Singularities ! :lol:

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    Malady wrote: Well, the other thread... Which is now gone for some reason, said it was a spoilers?


    On second thought I put the Kayda tag as a spoiler because I hadn't read it yet and I didn't want someone to read the first message and then be spoiled an eventual surprise in case the fact that it was a kayda story wasn't something they were expecting (I wasn't expecting a Kayda Gen2 story).


    Yeah, I didn't know that, so it just made it more interesting to me! Although, as she comes in right at the beginning, it's not actually a spoiler? Or a FirstEpisodeSpoiler, if one?

    Esar wrote: For some reason I hadn't immediatly picked up on the fact that it was a flashback, so it was strange for a moment. (and I am too ashamed to admit at which point in the story I realized it.) It was very emotional, I particularly liked the public speech scene.


    Same! ... I really should pay attention to the timestamps as well! :oops: :lol:

    ...

    When the goggles failed, I was like, OH SHIT! and then I thought it might be Carson, and her magic might save her, but no...

    I actually missed the hint from Dr. Barton with Laura that they disbanded! :pinch:

    Not as emotionally invested in the SFL as other people, so not as sad? Or I don't tear up as easily, either or...

    I thought it might have been Vox, at first, 'cause I was like "What's her last name again? *Wiki* Oh!... Jackson... So, not her..."

    If they still want kids... How are bio-gadgs in Gen 1.5 -
    8 years 4 weeks ago - 8 years 4 weeks ago #30 by Arcanist Lupus
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  • Kettlekorn wrote:

    Arcanist Lupus wrote: By shear coincidence, my music was playing The Highwayman as I reached the conclusion here.

    Oh jeez.


    Aren't Irish ballads fun?

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  • elrodw wrote: I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.

    The emotional turmoil that was the stuff in Doyle Complex dulled my senses by the time I got to the end. In fact, I kind of just skim the last paragraph without really reading it until you posted above. Yes, it has impact but there's so much stuff battering the reader before it that I barely registered the last paragraph.
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  • Malady wrote: I actually missed the hint from Dr. Barton with Laura that they disbanded! :pinch:

    Not as emotionally invested in the SFL as other people, so not as sad? Or I don't tear up as easily, either or...

    I thought it might have been Vox, at first, 'cause I was like "What's her last name again? *Wiki* Oh!... Jackson... So, not her..."

    If they still want kids... How are bio-gadgs in Gen 1.5 -


    And you think that I might NOT have something planned for the Bartons in Gen 2, such that fixing her in Gen 1.5 would ruin that perfectly good plot? :twisted:

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  • I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities, why not have her on speed dial? (Is she traveling among the stars? Is she in another plane of existance?) The fact that she's a demoneater is known to Whateley Security, which means that Mrs Carson knows as well, CIA probably knows as well, I mean, why not call her? She can even teleport so as long as she's on the planet she can come to help at moment notice. What about using her (or Sara, if she's aviable) to dispose the Evil rather than just keeping it sealed in a can?

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  • If I remember correctly the rationale : Yes they could use tennyo, and yes the enemy would be obliterated. But so would be the Earth along with it. The destroyer isn't meant for surgical strike.
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    8 years 4 weeks ago - 8 years 4 weeks ago #35 by Schol-R-LEA
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  • Exactly. I was expecting Mrs. Carson to say something like, "I did ask Ms. Hartford to track down Tennyo, in case we couldn't stop it and the nuclear weapon didn't either, but I'm not sure there would be anything left of the Upper Midwest if it came to that."

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    8 years 4 weeks ago - 8 years 4 weeks ago #36 by E. E. Nalley
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  • Otherself wrote: I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities, why not have her on speed dial? (Is she traveling among the stars? Is she in another plane of existance?) The fact that she's a demoneater is known to Whateley Security, which means that Mrs Carson knows as well, CIA probably knows as well, I mean, why not call her? She can even teleport so as long as she's on the planet she can come to help at moment notice. What about using her (or Sara, if she's aviable) to dispose the Evil rather than just keeping it sealed in a can?


    You're right, if Tennyo were alive and on Earth that would be the logical thing, wouldn't it?

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  • Hmm.

    Thinking about the last scene with Danica/Danny they seem to have come to accept both sides of themselves. I'm not sure if that is character development we haven't seen yet (as this takes place well beyond any of the current stories) or whether it is just them being overwhelmed by the situation.

    You might wonder why I bring this up, and really it is just that I had a thought for an interesting turn for the character and was going to see if anyone else agreed with the validity of it.

    Danny/Danica starts out hating their female side, but most people in Poe come to accept it as a part of their life. Not everyone, it wouldn't make sense for everyone, but most. And they have the advantage of being able to be either at any time.

    So what if over the years Danica/Danny started to not only accept but embrace the ability to flip flop forms across the gender divide (an ability I'm quite jealous of). To the point where they realise they are somewhere on the genderfluid spectrum (yes this is me shamelessly looking for representation where there isn't any [not that there is none at this site in this particular character], I'm part of like 4 invisible minorities I don't get a bunch of characters I can identify with) and now they've lost that ability.

    I'd love to see them go through a second journey of discovery where they start looking into fashions, hair styles, and binders that can make them look male or androgynous even though their form isn't. Have people be surprised that they lost the power to change forms because they put some work in and then just carried on like nothing happened.

    I'm sorry for my shameless speculation but I like Danny/Danica and their struggle to find an identity. Thye have the support their sister so they don't fall into deppression. Also they can be a cute kitty person, who doesn't like kitty people (other than you know people who are allergic to cats).

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  • Dreamer wrote: Would The Last One Out Please Turn Out The Lights comments

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    I expect that you already got the answer later in the story, but for anyone who didn't catch it:

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    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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  • Otherself wrote: I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities, why not have her on speed dial? (Is she traveling among the stars? Is she in another plane of existance?)


    As I understand it, demons themselves aren't Class X entities. However, I'm not sure I'd want the responsibility for letting Tennyo know there's an all-you-can-eat buffet in South Dakota.

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  • Otherself wrote: I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities, why not have her on speed dial? (Is she traveling among the stars? Is she in another plane of existance?) The fact that she's a demoneater is known to Whateley Security, which means that Mrs Carson knows as well, CIA probably knows as well, I mean, why not call her? She can even teleport so as long as she's on the planet she can come to help at moment notice. What about using her (or Sara, if she's aviable) to dispose the Evil rather than just keeping it sealed in a can?

    Katssun wrote:

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    Actually that was confirmed in Islands In the Sun

    Other than Tennyo being a weapon of ultimate last resort, there's also the potential problem "Is she on the planet?"

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  • Katssun wrote:

    elrodw wrote: I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.

    I can't speak for the rest of us, but I was frankly a bit numb by that point.

    I think the difference is, for you as the writer possessing the entire continuity inside your mind, including both before and after the events, meaning that that's the point in the writing where the emotional impact of the group falling apart appears to you. For me, and I'd assume most of the rest of the readers, we only get to see the continuity as it gets released. We already knew from "Not in Kansas" that the SFL had broken up, via heavy deaths and consequences. So the emotional impact isn't coming at the same place for us, as the emotional impact that the league was disbanded came from what amounts to a throwaway line coming from the Bartons talking to Laura as "In the past, we were part of a group. It ended". The focus on those scenes is Laura adjusting to Whateley, not finding out new events from old friends.
    And as Katssun said, we were a bit numb from the fight and hospital drama. The end of the league is kinda expected after that turmoil, even if we didn't already know about it happening.
    Still a very good, very emotional story, but that was my two pennies for why responses weren't lining up for your expectation for that scene.

    In regards to the discussion on what music to listen to while reading, I personally was strolling through Kingdom Hearts piano collections. There was quite a bit of soundtrack dissonance during the fight, but the fallout scenes? Yeah...

    In regards to the fear of WHAT took out Carson? I'm seconding (or thirding? Fourthing?) the idea of a hull breach in the pocket dimension. We know from A Tenuous Blade that Nimbus/Hekete's Master (I can't recall ATM) is fooling around down there, maybe he, or some equipment he leaves behind, recognises the demon aura leaking from the dimension, and tries to summon it?

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  • Excellent point. I had considered that, too, but we just don't know enough of what happened in the three years between the Gen1 stories now coming out and the events in this story to guess where she might be.

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  • And yet it isn't in the art gallery (I have just seen it too after reading your post). Maybe it is taking every image on the site for its rotation ?
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  • Esar wrote: And yet it isn't in the art gallery (I have just seen it too after reading your post). Maybe it is taking every image on the site for its rotation ?


    I've seen numerous avatar pictures picked up, including my own, so I think you're right about that.

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  • Malady wrote: Woah. Just saw the Plaque in the Art Rotation! So. Much. Spoilers?


    There is a critical file in the art gallery which has the index, mouse-over, and full captions for the art gallery drawings. If that file doesn't list a picture, it won't be displayed. I'm working on updating the gallery. Meanwhile, it shows up in the random images though, which operates off different package than the full-up gallery.

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote:

    Otherself wrote: I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities, why not have her on speed dial? (Is she traveling among the stars? Is she in another plane of existance?) The fact that she's a demoneater is known to Whateley Security, which means that Mrs Carson knows as well, CIA probably knows as well, I mean, why not call her? She can even teleport so as long as she's on the planet she can come to help at moment notice. What about using her (or Sara, if she's aviable) to dispose the Evil rather than just keeping it sealed in a can?


    You're right, if Tennyo were alive and on Earth that would be the logical thing, wouldn't it?

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    ......:angry: Come on, give me some credit, it doesn't take a rocket scientist to understand that there wouldn't be a story if Tennyo simply came and ate the opponent, but it's still a bit jarring how Tennyo is completely ignored, at the end the heroes seal the Evil in a can hoping it will be able to keep it sealed, not keep it sealed long enough for Tennyo to be aviable, not even a "I wish she could be here"...... She's treated as she never existed, and that's what left me wondering why.

    Anyway, I think I might have a mundane solution that might help getting rid of this particular Class X entity, Stuff it in a rocket and fire it in the Sun, while it was still a bigg ass snake demon popsicle it was too dangerous to do it, but while it is trapped inside the pocket dimension Mrs Carson created it might be safe enough to do. It might be worth a try.
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  • Otherself wrote:

    E. E. Nalley wrote:

    Otherself wrote: I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities, why not have her on speed dial? (Is she traveling among the stars? Is she in another plane of existance?) The fact that she's a demoneater is known to Whateley Security, which means that Mrs Carson knows as well, CIA probably knows as well, I mean, why not call her? She can even teleport so as long as she's on the planet she can come to help at moment notice. What about using her (or Sara, if she's aviable) to dispose the Evil rather than just keeping it sealed in a can?


    You're right, if Tennyo were alive and on Earth that would be the logical thing, wouldn't it?

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    ......:angry: Come on, give me some credit, it doesn't take a rocket scientist to understand that there wouldn't be a story if Tennyo simply came and ate the opponent, but it's still a bit jarring how Tennyo is completely ignored, at the end the heroes seal the Evil in a can hoping it will be able to keep it sealed, not keep it sealed long enough for Tennyo to be aviable, not even a "I wish she could be here"...... She's treated as she never existed, and that's what left me wondering why.

    Anyway, I think I might have a mundane solution that might help getting rid of this particular Class X entity, Stuff it in a rocket and fire it in the Sun, while it was still a bigg ass snake demon popsicle it was too dangerous to do it, but while it is trapped inside the pocket dimension Mrs Carson created it might be safe enough to do. It might be worth a try.


    You know, if you had READ my response instead of getting pissy at what is obviously a really elaborate joke you might not come across as a jerk. It's not very heroic to piss and moan about who ISN'T available. Do you read Steve Rogers pissing and moaning that the Fantastic Four are off fighting Galactus? No. They cowboy up and soldier on.

    You know, my first pass on this response was pretty thermonuclear and profanity ridden, but I'm going to take the high road and ask one FINAL time nicely for people to STOP asking why orphaned main characters don't take part in something. If Fey, or Tennyo or Jade show up in a story, take it as a gift, be grateful and enjoy and if they don't it's very simply because we didn't want to write them. Ok? Stop it. This is one of my buttons, stop pressing it.

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  • Otherself wrote: Anyway, I think I might have a mundane solution that might help getting rid of this particular Class X entity, Stuff it in a rocket and fire it in the Sun, while it was still a bigg ass snake demon popsicle it was too dangerous to do it, but while it is trapped inside the pocket dimension Mrs Carson created it might be safe enough to do. It might be worth a try.

    Two problems with that. First, sending something into the sun is non-trivial. While cheaper to do in the WU, it's still going to be an expensive undertaking in most cases. Second, most ways of sending something into the sun involve traveling at least the intervening 93 million miles, which takes a good bit of time. That's time during which a bad guy could intercept and steal Unhcegila's prison for whatever nefarious purpose. You can lessen that risk by sending guardians along to escort him, but that means a lot more expense along with occupying the time of the guardians, leaving their home communities with less protection.

    Of course, if you have access to a warper or mage who can just teleport an object (without accompanying it) a good 93 million miles, you can bypass those objections. Assuming his prison can even be teleported in the first place.

    But, then there's the question of what happens when Unhcegila dies. He's some big-time evil, and that kind of stuff isn't always as simple as "Just kill it and everything will be better!" We already saw that with how the heroes avoided killing his third child to deny him the ability to spawn three new snakes. It's entirely possible that killing Unhcegila would just cause him to be reborn again somewhere else, outside their control. Killing him is worth that risk when the alternative is letting him rampage unchecked, but now that he's under control, it has turned into an "If it ain't broke, don't fix it" type scenario.

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  • Also, there's always a possibility that Snakey is straight up immortal (or at least can't be killed by the sun). In which case, while marinating in the sun won't be pleasant, there's a chance that after a couple thousand years Snakey will adapt to the environment. And now you have a giant evil snake that's capable of tapping into the most powerful energy source in the Solar System. Have fun!

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  • Arcanist Lupus wrote: Also, there's always a possibility that Snakey is straight up immortal (or at least can't be killed by the sun). In which case, while marinating in the sun won't be pleasant, there's a chance that after a couple thousand years Snakey will adapt to the environment. And now you have a giant evil snake that's capable of tapping into the most powerful energy source in the Solar System. Have fun!


    Reminds me of SCP-682 + Catapult Into Sun Joke SCP...
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  • Or maybe there's something living in the sun already, and giving it a tainted snake to snack on will drive it nuts.

    There are lots of ways that sun disposal could go horribly wrong, and the sun isn't something you want to take chances with no matter how unlikely they are.

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: You know, if you had READ my response instead of getting pissy at what is obviously a really elaborate joke you might not come across as a jerk. It's not very heroic to piss and moan about who ISN'T available. Do you read Steve Rogers pissing and moaning that the Fantastic Four are off fighting Galactus? No. They cowboy up and soldier on.

    You know, my first pass on this response was pretty thermonuclear and profanity ridden, but I'm going to take the high road and ask one FINAL time nicely for people to STOP asking why orphaned main characters don't take part in something. If Fey, or Tennyo or Jade show up in a story, take it as a gift, be grateful and enjoy and if they don't it's very simply because we didn't want to write them. Ok? Stop it. This is one of my buttons, stop pressing it.

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    It seems that we are experiencing a failure in comunication, so I'll try to clear things up.

    First thing first, I was not pissy, I did get the joke, but I also found mildly annoying that you simply dismissed what I was saying, you din't address anything of what I said, you didn't even disagreed and explained why, hell, you could have just said that there were reasons for it to be that way but you couldn't tell to avoid spoilers, but you framed your response in a way that dismissed what I said as silly AND turned the attenction away from what I was trying to say. My reaction was "That's not the point".

    I might have to apologize for the emote that I used, I was looking for something that rolls the eyes while frowning, I didn't find it so I tried to find the closest thing I could find, there aren't many options for negative emotions, there's sadness and anger, mere annoyance is not aviable. I debated a little if I should have used no emote or go for an hyperbole, I thought that there was no warm going for the latter, it would seem that I was wrong.

    Now, considering your raction it seems that the point I was trying to make didn't come across right, so I'll try again:

    At the time of the Five Fold Court there was High Magic, it was the bedrock of civilization and instrument of war, a war against an enemy that had magics that could cause the end of the world as we know it and for the most part did. Nowdays there is some magic but it's minor thing compared to the ancient times, there are evils sealed in cans and we have no way to seal them again if they get loose and the ancient enemy that caused the end of the world as we know it is coming back, good guys have flintlock pistols, bad guys are preparing orbital bombardment, the situation is bleak. Then comes the likes of the Kellith and the Starstalker, the Kellith being a friendly baby GOO that while might not be strong enough to face the bigger evils sealed in a can it can mop up lesser evils and prevent unsealing the worst cans, while the Starstalker was made to deal with the likes of Chtulhu, unlike the ancient civilization, which could only seal the evils away, this two entities can kill and consume them. That is HUGE, is a complete game changer, in the mystical arms race the current civilization is extremely weak, but it is handed the instruments to ensure its survival in the form of this two entities. That is my perception of the situation up to Gen 1 time.

    Now what made me wonder is that so far I haven't seen even the faintest hint of the universe aknowledging this fact, that's all that I was saying. I didn't say "Why didn't Tennyo show up?", I said "I wonder why nobody seems to consider the potential that Tennyo might have had in situations like this". And no, I don't expect an aswer, I don't want spoilers, but since it leaves me with a question mark hanging over my head I thought I might say that this leaves me wondering, nothing else.

    I don't want characters shoehorned into stories, Tennyo simply wasn't there, she wasn't aviable, she couldn't get there in time, amen. But can I at least wonder why the universe doesn't seem to aknowledge her existance and say that it confuses me?

    And Tennyo or no Tennyo, my reaction to this:

    The evil demon was sealed in a pocket dimension of Lady Astarte's creation, and thus control. From inside, it would be nearly impossible for Snakey to get out, and if he did manage, the spherical silver gateway would be sealed into a low level of the HPARC facility, this time hopefully with even stronger force fields and wards and cryo-chilling.

    was:"What?" Lady Astarte's poket dimension is a stronger can than the one it just broke out of, if it manages to break out of the new can do you want to entrust your safety to a better copy of the previous can can? It already proved to not be enough. Find a way to dispose that thing, fire it in the sun, if that pocket dimension might have bad interactions with the sun drop it on the surface of Mercury, if it gets loose it gets a close up of solar radiation unfiltered by any atmosphere, or maybe drop it inside Jupiter, let's see how it gets out of a gas giant, and if FTL is aviable consider dropping it in a black hole. No "hopefully with even stronger force fields and wards and cryo-chilling", somewhere were he can't go return to Earth from.
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  • Otherself wrote: I might have to apologize for the emote that I used, I was looking for something that rolls the eyes while frowning, I didn't find it so I tried to find the closest thing I could find, there aren't many options for negative emotions, there's sadness and anger, mere annoyance is not aviable. I debated a little if I should have used no emote or go for an hyperbole, I thought that there was no warm going for the latter, it would seem that I was wrong.


    Yeah, since emotes are a primary indicator of emotion, accurate choice is important.

    Note that we do have more emotes, they're just only discoverable from the PM Composer .
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  • Otherself, I think we might be talking past each other, so let me see if I can explain this more clearly.

    First and foremost, these forums are designed SO people can ask questions and get clarification. This isn't just an ego stroking exercise for us. (But everybody loves a happy ending, am I right? :) ) So, if we can answer a question with out spoiling something, we will. Sometimes we're more vague than others and that's generally a clue that you've hit upon something when we get coy.

    That said, I understand you were asking in universe why and (again in a somewhat coy fashion) I answered your question. The important bit was:

    if Tennyo were alive and on Earth

    Now, I made a joke because I was also answering your question in the meta way that is external to the universe. Starwolf ran into the Superman paradox and quit. There were other factors, but writing for a character as powerful as Fey or Tennyo can be hard to give them a challenge that won't wipe out everyone else. So you have in and out of "game" answers to your question. But if you're worried about a potential spoiler, then be careful what you ask because if we can answer it, we will.

    And sometimes, like now, folks get more information than they might want.

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  • I'm going to jump in, and hopefully this will be THE END of the 'talking past each other' and 'misunderstood emoticons'.

    NONE of us want to try to write Tennyo. Not directly. I show her from time to time, but not as a POV or major character. The closest I'll do is like I did with Jade in Best Days part 3. I don't know of any author that's ready to write an orphaned character as POV.

    Next, with regard to Tennyo. First, ask yourself how many people are aware of Tennyo? She was a rather large target for culties and others, so having her hidden is pretty important who would like to control her. Would you let the government know all the details about someone like that? I know that I sure wouldn't. (NO government is free of corruption; it's just the degree IMHO.)

    Second, Tennyo's application of force is like performing an appendectomy with a shovel. Dirty, blunt shovel. She's pure force, but is learning finesse. How much control does she have of her 'demon-eating' power? Don't know. She doesn't get a lot of chance to exercise that particular skill. So what seems like finesse to her might mean only the Dakotas and Wyoming get nuked.

    Third, there's the simple point of story-telling. What drama exists if any time a character gets in trouble, they simply call Fey or Tennyo (or even Ayla to bring in money) and -POOF- problem all solved. Where's the opportunity for character growth, for tense situations? I know for a fact that EE's post was made to emphasize how totally-lacking in drama the Tennyo Option would be. Amusing? Yes. Dramatic? No. Engaging for readers? Again, no.

    In real life? Anyone who knew about Tennyo would consider whether it was a good idea or not. Depending on (again) how much control she has. In a story? Yes, it'd be possible, and if necessary to avoid the obvious 'big hammer' approach, I'll find McGuffins to keep the really heavy hitters out of play so MY characters can get some screen time. None of us like to write BORING. So understand that point, and if you have questions, try to phrase them a little more carefully. It's okay to ask, but let's not let them degenerate into nasty arguments.

    (And if I'm the voice of sanity and reason, we're really in deep stuff.)

    So, let's put that discussion to bed. We are all making good points here, and in the ... enthusiasm ... of the discussion, it seems that some points are being missed. Okay, I said what I need to. Done, finito, finished, terminado, am Ende, stick a fork in it, it'd be pushing up the daisies if it hadn't been nailed to the perch!

    Now let's all join hands and sing Kum ba ...(thud - Stop it! Stop it! NOT like that! NO SINGING!!!)

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  • One last consideration:

    Humans forget shit. People have fought entire battles with a pistol, knife or shotgun and only belatedly realized: my rifle was on my shoulder the whole time! It's possible to have a crisis that occupies your attention so totally that the only things you can think to bring to bear are what you have on-hand RIGHT NOW.

    Do you know how to get ahold of the hammer?

    Can they be there in time?

    Do you even think of the hammer?

    Gotta remember folks, that mutants are still humn, they make mistakes, they forget things.

    So even if it wasn't important to the story for certain characters to have the spotlight, the characters don't have the omniscient understanding required to pull the optimal resources for all of the crisis points.
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  • elrodw wrote: I'm going to jump in, and hopefully this will be THE END of the 'talking past each other' and 'misunderstood emoticons'.

    NONE of us want to try to write Tennyo. Not directly. I show her from time to time, but not as a POV or major character. The closest I'll do is like I did with Jade in Best Days part 3. I don't know of any author that's ready to write an orphaned character as POV.

    Next, with regard to Tennyo. First, ask yourself how many people are aware of Tennyo? She was a rather large target for culties and others, so having her hidden is pretty important who would like to control her. Would you let the government know all the details about someone like that? I know that I sure wouldn't. (NO government is free of corruption; it's just the degree IMHO.)


    On earth, Team Kimba, Chou, Sara, Mrs. Carson, perhaps Ty West, Kayda, and Circe. I really doubt anyone else knows. So how many of those were at the Snakey battle? Mrs. Carson and Kayda, neither of which had time to call for backup. The one time Kayda did have time to call for backup, she called Fey, so it's even doubtful she knows about Tennyo.

    Second, Tennyo's application of force is like performing an appendectomy with a shovel. Dirty, blunt shovel. She's pure force, but is learning finesse. How much control does she have of her 'demon-eating' power? Don't know. She doesn't get a lot of chance to exercise that particular skill. So what seems like finesse to her might mean only the Dakotas and Wyoming get nuked.

    Third, there's the simple point of story-telling. What drama exists if any time a character gets in trouble, they simply call Fey or Tennyo (or even Ayla to bring in money) and -POOF- problem all solved. Where's the opportunity for character growth, for tense situations? I know for a fact that EE's post was made to emphasize how totally-lacking in drama the Tennyo Option would be. Amusing? Yes. Dramatic? No. Engaging for readers? Again, no.

    In real life? Anyone who knew about Tennyo would consider whether it was a good idea or not. Depending on (again) how much control she has. In a story? Yes, it'd be possible, and if necessary to avoid the obvious 'big hammer' approach, I'll find McGuffins to keep the really heavy hitters out of play so MY characters can get some screen time. None of us like to write BORING. So understand that point, and if you have questions, try to phrase them a little more carefully. It's okay to ask, but let's not let them degenerate into nasty arguments.

    (And if I'm the voice of sanity and reason, we're really in deep stuff.)

    So, let's put that discussion to bed. We are all making good points here, and in the ... enthusiasm ... of the discussion, it seems that some points are being missed. Okay, I said what I need to. Done, finito, finished, terminado, am Ende, stick a fork in it, it'd be pushing up the daisies if it hadn't been nailed to the perch!

    Now let's all join hands and sing Kum ba ...(thud - Stop it! Stop it! NOT like that! NO SINGING!!!)


    Since I kind of started this, I would like to make one thing clear. I neither expect, nor want to see a story starring Kayda, or Lanie, or Jericho, where they run into trouble and call "Superman" to solve their problem. I do expect them to act intelligently though.

    The Book of Darwin wrote: The outcasts all stared at her like she’d gone insane, and then they moved. Jericho immediately called up his Rafe Armor, freshly connected to the new shield hanging off of its left arm, then engaged another trigger. Slapdash’s anti-tank Core-Ejector materialized in his right hand as he began calling the CB emergency Band. “Emergency, Darwin is under attack, I repeat Darwin is under attack. Dr. Reaper is materializing killbots over downtown.”

    “Say again, there is no…”

    “Shut up and get the word out, four minutes, tops and we’re going to have people dying. Get the Overwatch Defense team and every fucking soldier you can mobilized now!”


    The first thing Jericho did was get armed and armored up, then he called for help. Ayla did a similar thing when fighting the Demon in California, Chou did the same thing for the meeting with the Chinese officials. Chaka nevers calls for help. Jadis did it when she called Dragonrider for help with Dragonblade. It does happen quite often in the stories. A lot of the time there isn't time to call for help, but when there is, I would expect people to call, especially professionals.

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  • Valentine wrote: On earth, Team Kimba, Chou, Sara, Mrs. Carson, perhaps Ty West, Kayda, and Circe. I really doubt anyone else knows. So how many of those were at the Snakey battle? Mrs. Carson and Kayda, neither of which had time to call for backup. The one time Kayda did have time to call for backup, she called Fey, so it's even doubtful she knows about Tennyo.


    Nailed it. You don't call someone for backup if you don't KNOW that they can back you up. Kayda doesn't know. The only thing is that Wakan Tanka warned her that Billie had some important and dangerous thing about her. That's all she knows.

    Valentine wrote: Since I kind of started this, I would like to make one thing clear. I neither expect, nor want to see a story starring Kayda, or Lanie, or Jericho, where they run into trouble and call "Superman" to solve their problem. I do expect them to act intelligently though.


    Okay, I took a drink to calm down. Are you insinuating that Kayda DIDN'T act intelligently? This fight was a total surprise, and she did the best she could, trying to protect a lot of people and get the women out of danger. She did NOT have time.

    "Um, Uncy?"
    "Yeah?"
    "Time out. I gotta call backup."
    "WHAT?"
    "Time out. I'm calling my backup. Also going to summon my extra fighting gear. Should only take a moment."
    "Um - who says you can do that?"
    "I called Time Out, that's why!"

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    That's just the type of person she is.
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  • elrodw wrote:

    Valentine wrote: On earth, Team Kimba, Chou, Sara, Mrs. Carson, perhaps Ty West, Kayda, and Circe. I really doubt anyone else knows. So how many of those were at the Snakey battle? Mrs. Carson and Kayda, neither of which had time to call for backup. The one time Kayda did have time to call for backup, she called Fey, so it's even doubtful she knows about Tennyo.


    Nailed it. You don't call someone for backup if you don't KNOW that they can back you up. Kayda doesn't know. The only thing is that Wakan Tanka warned her that Billie had some important and dangerous thing about her. That's all she knows.

    Valentine wrote: Since I kind of started this, I would like to make one thing clear. I neither expect, nor want to see a story starring Kayda, or Lanie, or Jericho, where they run into trouble and call "Superman" to solve their problem. I do expect them to act intelligently though.


    Okay, I took a drink to calm down. Are you insinuating that Kayda DIDN'T act intelligently? This fight was a total surprise, and she did the best she could, trying to protect a lot of people and get the women out of danger. She did NOT have time.

    "Um, Uncy?"
    "Yeah?"
    "Time out. I gotta call backup."
    "WHAT?"
    "Time out. I'm calling my backup. Also going to summon my extra fighting gear. Should only take a moment."
    "Um - who says you can do that?"
    "I called Time Out, that's why!"


    Nope, not implying that Kayda didn't act intelligently. Given the amount of time she had as warning, she acted highly intelligently. She made sure that everyone knew to run away and not look back. The SFL on the other hand should have tried to get backup. The knew and had time, even if no backup could arrive to save them, they would already be on the way to help with clean up (there was a nuke on the way) or to try to defeat Snakey.

    Valentine wrote: Uncehgila finally got free, and it took a hell of a lot to stop him. This does bring up one thing that I have always disliked about comics and the way most of my friends run superhero games. When facing a potentially cataclysmic foe, why don't people call for support?

    Kayda didn't have a chance, Lanie eventually did, but what was the SFL thinking? Admittedly none of the "nearby" teams, those in the Rockies, and Chicago area, are close enough to get there in time to help unless they have access to a teleporter, but if everything goes bad at least they are on the way. ARC has powered armor troops in orbit, presumably with the same sort of defenses as the HPARC armor had, but no one called them? Or Whateley? Someone is going to have clean the are, and it's likely to be ARC, with some help from Whateley.


    From my first post on the subject.

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  • Valentine wrote:

    elrodw wrote:

    Valentine wrote: Since I kind of started this, I would like to make one thing clear. I neither expect, nor want to see a story starring Kayda, or Lanie, or Jericho, where they run into trouble and call "Superman" to solve their problem. I do expect them to act intelligently though.


    Okay, I took a drink to calm down. Are you insinuating that Kayda DIDN'T act intelligently? This fight was a total surprise, and she did the best she could, trying to protect a lot of people and get the women out of danger. She did NOT have time.

    "Um, Uncy?"
    "Yeah?"
    "Time out. I gotta call backup."
    "WHAT?"
    "Time out. I'm calling my backup. Also going to summon my extra fighting gear. Should only take a moment."
    "Um - who says you can do that?"
    "I called Time Out, that's why!"


    Nope, not implying that Kayda didn't act intelligently. Given the amount of time she had as warning, she acted highly intelligently. She made sure that everyone knew to run away and not look back. The SFL on the other hand should have tried to get backup. The knew and had time, even if no backup could arrive to save them, they would already be on the way to help with clean up (there was a nuke on the way) or to try to defeat Snakey.

    Valentine wrote: Uncehgila finally got free, and it took a hell of a lot to stop him. This does bring up one thing that I have always disliked about comics and the way most of my friends run superhero games. When facing a potentially cataclysmic foe, why don't people call for support?

    Kayda didn't have a chance, Lanie eventually did, but what was the SFL thinking? Admittedly none of the "nearby" teams, those in the Rockies, and Chicago area, are close enough to get there in time to help unless they have access to a teleporter, but if everything goes bad at least they are on the way. ARC has powered armor troops in orbit, presumably with the same sort of defenses as the HPARC armor had, but no one called them? Or Whateley? Someone is going to have clean the are, and it's likely to be ARC, with some help from Whateley.


    From my first post on the subject.


    Ah, ok. I figured I'd try something amusing rather than launch, because I didn't think you would be insulting. And if my reply seemed snippy, then let me assure you that was not the way it was intended.
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    You assume that during the 35 minute flight, the SFL didn't try to get backup. There was a lot that wasn't shown or told, but perhaps I should have touched on this bit. They're pros - they would have called for any backup they could get. We don't know if the SD Air National Guard and Army National Guard had assets they were bringing, or if those were deliberately held back because of "Strangelove". Same for ARC resource - it's very likely they decided to NOT drop into what would be a very radioactive zone once Strangelove was activated.

    BTW, I noticed that NO-ONE made any comment about the code word "Strangelove". I felt sure there would be some comments on that.

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  • elrodw wrote: BTW, I noticed that NO-ONE made any comment about the code word "Strangelove". I felt sure there would be some comments on that.

    I noticed it, but I'm extremely terrible at remembering my immediate reactions to stories unless I write them down.


    It really is a good thing that I'm not allowed to make codewords. Every single one I made would be either an obscure reference or a bad pun. Probably both.

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  • elrodw wrote: Ah, ok. I figured I'd try something amusing rather than launch, because I didn't think you would be insulting. And if my reply seemed snippy, then let me assure you that was not the way it was intended.
    Humor - ar, ar

    You assume that during the 35 minute flight, the SFL didn't try to get backup. There was a lot that wasn't shown or told, but perhaps I should have touched on this bit. They're pros - they would have called for any backup they could get. We don't know if the SD Air National Guard and Army National Guard had assets they were bringing, or if those were deliberately held back because of "Strangelove". Same for ARC resource - it's very likely they decided to NOT drop into what would be a very radioactive zone once Strangelove was activated.

    BTW, I noticed that NO-ONE made any comment about the code word "Strangelove". I felt sure there would be some comments on that.


    Well, you mentioned Cornflower trying to call Kayda, you mentioned them calling the National Guard, I expected at least a mention of them trying to call others. About the National Guard, if Snakey tore up a Battalion, I didn't expect the SDNG to have much more in the way of assets to through at Snakey, and I certainly didn't expect the SFL to deliberately send more soldiers to die needlessly.


    "Strangelove" is a fairly unique codeword, not much to get it confused about what you could mean, as opposed to "Bikini" or "Trinity." "Hiroshima" or "Nagasaki" would be a bit sick to use as codewords. "Oppenheimer" might not be bad.

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  • elrodw wrote: BTW, I noticed that NO-ONE made any comment about the code word "Strangelove". I felt sure there would be some comments on that.

    Oops, knew I forgot to mention something in my comments. Would it be a reference to the movie Dr. Strangelove or: How I Learned How To Stop Worrying and Love the Bomb. Heard of the movie but never saw it myself.

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  • I caught and was amused by the Dr. Strangelove reference, but I haven't actually seen that movie yet either (it's definitely on my list).

    As for Tennyo, if Norad C was any indication, then you clean up after a real throw-down Tennyo fight by nuking the place. And well, if you're going to have to nuke it anyway, then you might as well just nuke it in the first place. Rule of thumb: only call Godzilla Tennyo after the monster shrugs off your nukes.

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    elrodw wrote: BTW, I noticed that NO-ONE made any comment about the code word "Strangelove". I felt sure there would be some comments on that.

    Oops, knew I forgot to mention something in my comments. Would it be a reference to the movie Dr. Strangelove or: How I Learned How To Stop Worrying and Love the Bomb. Heard of the movie but never saw it myself.


    Huh. I think people didn't mention it because it was either a) too self-evident to require comment, or b) went totally over their heads. I would have guessed a as the primary reason, but comments on elrodw's comment suggest b is more common.

    To anybody who hasn't seen the movie, it's very much worth watching.
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  • I thought the reference was extremely obvious, unless it wasn't actually a missile, and some warper is riding the bomb down to make sure it hits correctly.

    It's probably Murphy...isn't it?
    edit: Oh wait, it would have to be someone else. Tansy wasn't at the meeting.
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  • Kettlekorn wrote: Rule of thumb: only call Godzilla Tennyo after the monster shrugs off your nukes.


    And you've evacuated the planet.

    Most important, never release Tennyo on the planet you keep your things on.
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  • Otherself wrote: I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities, why not have her on speed dial? (Is she traveling among the stars? Is she in another plane of existance?) The fact that she's a demoneater is known to Whateley Security, which means that Mrs Carson knows as well, CIA probably knows as well, I mean, why not call her? She can even teleport so as long as she's on the planet she can come to help at moment notice. What about using her (or Sara, if she's aviable) to dispose the Evil rather than just keeping it sealed in a can?

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    Um, no. It wasn't. Just that someone was or is known as the Sidhe Queen.
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    A couple of good quotes:

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  • Otherself wrote: I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities,


    From memory, we only know that she seems to eat GOO's, not necessarily all class X's
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  • Katssun wrote: Honestly...Kayda is lucky she was able to go into battle clothed.

    That's just the type of person she is.


    No, That's the kind of author Elrodw is... :lol:


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  • Mister D wrote:

    Katssun wrote: Honestly...Kayda is lucky she was able to go into battle clothed.

    That's just the type of person she is.


    No, That's the kind of author Elrodw is... :lol:


    Naah, elrod was rather kind here, Kayda didn't end up dead before the fight even started.

    Bad joke aside... That was really impressive. Excellent fireworks and conclusion for the story with Snakey, and offering some really powerfiul moments of emotion. Not really much more to say which wasn't already said, and I'm not sure I couuld really do it justice anyways. Now, as Bardue would say, why Tatanka wasn't summoned? Don't tell me Kayda is still operating by 'I must prove myself worthy by not using my spirit. Ever.' in 2011.
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  • Hardric wrote: Now, as Bardue would say, why Tatanka wasn't summoned? Don't tell me Kayda is still operating by 'I must prove myself worthy by not using my spirit. Ever.' in 2011.

    When Tonka Trucka gets hurt and again when he dissipates, Kayda gets hurt too. It has been detrimental to the outcome of her fights so far. The after effects of him getting hurt could have killed her at a critical moment. Her shield spells are more reliable against that type of threat.

    Gunny is right, she should use him more, but his main benefit is to shred PK bricks who are overconfident in their durability. Snakey isn't relying on any PK, so she's better off just going for it, like she did.
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    Hardric wrote: Now, as Bardue would say, why Tatanka wasn't summoned? Don't tell me Kayda is still operating by 'I must prove myself worthy by not using my spirit. Ever.' in 2011.

    When Tonka Trucka gets hurt and again when he dissipates, Kayda gets hurt too. It has been detrimental to the outcome of her fights so far. The after effects of him getting hurt could have killed her at a critical moment. Her shield spells are more reliable against that type of threat.

    Gunny is right, she should use him more, but his main benefit is to shred PK bricks who are overconfident in their durability. Snakey isn't relying on any PK, so she's better off just going for it, like she did.


    Tatanka isn't very useful for most combat where she might want something as powerful as him, then... Anything she'd like his strength for, is more detrimental because of Painshare...
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  • Tatanka also runs into the problem that in this situation it's entity vs entity combat. Unless the little guy has a trick up his sleeve that specifically punks the big guy, it's little guy that's going down. As mentioned above, it would be magic (horn) vs. magic (skin), unlike magic (horn) vs. psi (shield).

    So, Tatanka vs. Unhcegila would only make sense to me if Kayda was dying anyway and Tatanka's suicide run would buy time for the remainder of the team to regroup and win. I suspect that that would leave both Brandon/Kayda and Ptesanwi weakened for a few more turns around the Wheel, with Tatanka NOT coming back unless corrupted, so it would have to be a really, really good suicide run.

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  • Forgot about the Painshare thing, and didn't think about the other points. Sorry for the stupid question.
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  • Hardric wrote: Forgot about the Painshare thing, and didn't think about the other points. Sorry for the stupid question.


    Not a stupid question. A stupid question would be why didn't Kayda send everyone to attack Snakey as canon fodder?

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    Hardric wrote: Forgot about the Painshare thing, and didn't think about the other points. Sorry for the stupid question.


    Not a stupid question. A stupid question would be why didn't Kayda send everyone to attack Snakey as canon fodder?

    lol the answer to that one would be because she is not jade
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  • I was wondering, Card Trick got her mind wipe just like that kid had with Snakey Jr the First, isn't it possible to use magic to deage her? If she's going to relearn everything like an infant let her have a normal childhood at least.

    A deaging spell might be overpowered because it could be used to become immortal (I am 60, I deage myself back to 20, rinse and repeat, you have the potential of living forever), however it could have the catch that along with taking away years from the body it also takes away years from the mind, the memory, the experience, everything, like the past self had been transported foreward in time with no knowledge of what happened during the time skip. This (along with the difficulty of casting a such spell) would make make the spell's usefulness very limited in general, however in this specific case the drawback is inexistant as there are no memories to lose in first place.

    This could also give the Bartons a daughter to love and raise if Vanessa's problem can't be solved.... or even if it can and does get solved.
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    8 years 3 weeks ago #84 by Malady
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  • Otherself wrote: I was wondering, Card Trick got her mind wipe just like that kid had with Snakey Jr the First, isn't it possible to use magic to deage her? If she's going to relearn everything like an infant let her have a normal childhood at least.

    A deaging spell might be overpowered because it could be used to become immortal (I am 60, I deage myself back to 20, rinse and repeat, you have the potential of living forever), however it could have the catch that along with taking away years from the body it also takes away years from the mind, the memory, the experience, everything, like the past self had been transported foreward in time with no knowledge of what happened during the time skip. This (along with the difficulty of casting a such spell) would make make the spell's usefulness very limited in general, however in this specific case the drawback is inexistant as there are no memories to lose in first place.

    This could also give the Bartons a daughter to love and raise if Vanessa's problem can't be solved.... or even if it can and does get solved.


    This might be the solution, actually, because there are youth spells, or other methods, given the number of 100+ year old mages about. Turning yourself back into a kid is usually an unwanted effect, so they likely just aren't given that much power, if could be used to do such things.
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  • Seems to me like that would be an unnecessary risk. Non-trivial magic has a tendency to go wrong or otherwise incorporate unfortunate consequences. This being Whateley, she'd probably end up having to change her name to Vincent.

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  • Sure, but nobody was proposing de-aging her as a cure for the vegetative state. Using magic to fix that would definitely be reasonable. It's after she exits vegetable mode and enters "adult with the mind of an infant" mode when the question arises about whether she should be de-aged so her body matches her mind.

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  • Assuming she could be de-aged back to babyhood, would she de-manifest or remain active?

    If de-manifest would even she re-manifest and if so with the same powerset?
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  • annachie wrote: Assuming she could be de-aged back to babyhood, would she de-manifest or remain active?

    If de-manifest would even she re-manifest and if so with the same powerset?


    Well, now, that's an interesting set of questions to an interesting proposition.
    I'd answer it if I had thought if this particular scenario ... :evil:

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  • Hm... What's the legality of turning people into babies without their express permission as a medical treatment?


    For the record, I'm mostly bringing this up because I wanted to ask the question "Is it legal to turn people into babies?" :D

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  • It is not. Why? Because babies are not physiologically (or psychologically) capable of retaining the memories of adult mind. Sufficient connections present and the abstract thought processes needed to comprehend it ... simply don't exist yet. Most humans are incapable of accepting anything other than what is concretely revealed by their senses thought for several years into their development - this is why 'peek a boo' works. And we are nearly in our teens before we develop the capability to understand morality/ethics and similar abstract concepts. Regression to points below the ability to grasp abstracts would damage an adult psyche... it would destablize around those things that are not concrete perceived experiences. And regression to the point of losing non-perceived elements would break down most of the personality. Anything left would probably be hopelessly muddled at the points below age 2 where even the senses aren't developed to the degree necessary to perceive things the way adults do. It'd be different from being in a sensory deprivation tank... but spending months/years growing up from being a baby would probably mess you up as badly as being in sensory deprivation for that much time.

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  • This is also assuming that looking into Unceghilas gaze doesn't obliterate the brains ability to form cognitive and mnemonic connections entirely, leaving the body and mind dead husks with no hope of recovery to become a normal person again.

    And worse still...

    *runs off to whisper sweet evils into Elrods ear.*
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  • JG wrote: This is also assuming that looking into Unceghilas gaze doesn't obliterate the brains ability to form cognitive and mnemonic connections entirely, leaving the body and mind dead husks with no hope of recovery to become a normal person again.

    And worse still...

    *runs off to whisper sweet evils into Elrods ear.*


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    annachie wrote: Assuming she could be de-aged back to babyhood, would she de-manifest or remain active?

    If de-manifest would even she re-manifest and if so with the same powerset?


    Well, now, that's an interesting set of questions to an interesting proposition.
    I'd answer it if I had thought if this particular scenario ... :evil:


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  • Arcanist Lupus wrote: Hm... What's the legality of turning people into babies without their express permission as a medical treatment?


    For the record, I'm mostly bringing this up because I wanted to ask the question "Is it legal to turn people into babies?" :D

    Well, the situation is akin to a comatose patient who is unable to give consent to medical procedures. In this case, Card Trick's next-of-kin or legal guardians would be the ones who would have to give consent.

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  • You'd have to assume that Card Trick's parents would give consent. But what if, say, her dad had a heart attack or stroke from the stress of losing his little girl, and her mom basically lost it over losing the two of them? Then who would give consent?

    Not that I'm planning anything, mind you ....
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  • elrodw wrote: You'd have to assume that Card Trick's parents would give consent. But what if, say, her dad had a heart attack or stroke from the stress of losing his little girl, and her mom basically lost it over losing the two of them? Then who would give consent?

    Not that I'm planning anything, mind you ....
    :twisted: :evil:


    Grandparents? Did Cardtrick have a living will? Brothers or sisters? Spouse? Perverted Uncle? Finally the State.

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  • This is totally unrelated to the story, but with Renae's return, the story title is so inappropriate for the Whateley Universe.

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  • Otherself wrote:
    A deaging spell might be overpowered because it could be used to become immortal (I am 60, I deage myself back to 20, rinse and repeat, you have the potential of living forever), however it could have the catch that along with taking away years from the body it also takes away years from the mind, the memory, the experience, everything, like the past self had been transported foreward in time with no knowledge of what happened during the time skip. This (along with the difficulty of casting a such spell) would make make the spell's usefulness very limited in general, however in this specific case the drawback is inexistant as there are no memories to lose in first place.

    .


    Sooner or later the laws of magic would catch you!

    Law One, also called Law of Balance or Rule of Reaction, states that for every action, no matter how small or unintentional, there is always a reaction of equal or greater intensity.
    So those years come from some where? 200 innocent kids suddenly turn 90 and drop dead! Then you get hunted by other 'good' mages!

    The Law of Cyclicality states that things work in cycles. They begin, they work their way to a mid-point, then they decline, and finally end
    the spell works once or twice then fades quicker and quicker till you are casting it nearly daily to LIVE!

    The Law of Nemesis states that when someone or something begins to advance a course of action, the Universe will bring up something or someone to oppose it.
    you get older and the universe makes something to KILL you to balance out the scales

    The Rule of the Essential Flaw states that nothing is perfect. It means that there is a weak spot in everything and that nothing anyone does is unbreakable. However the weak spot can be hard to find, especially in well constructed spells.
    Soonner or later? you will goof and end up 2000 years old and dust!

    The Rule of Three states that in mystical conflicts one side has three chances to attack the other before the Law of Balance takes full effect and makes further attacks a supremely bad idea until balance is restored.
    what it says---

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  • Or there's a devise which does the job without invoking the laws of magic and their sometimes-unpleasant side-effects...

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  • However it obviously IS possible to become, for practical purposes, immortal.

    Look at Circe.

    However its likely not easy.

    Also, there is the big problem of keeping track of your memories, there is a limit to what you can store in the brain. Edit out too much (to give more space), and eventually you may as well have died.

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  • I assumed several cases:

    1. Used by Circe and other "white" Wizards. A spell that prevents aging, but does not reverse it. The younger you figure out the spell the better.

    2. Used by "black" Wizards. A spell, almost certainly blood magic, that will reverse aging.

    3. A Mythos spell that that plays with age.

    Or you could just borrow Mr. Bradbury's carousel.

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  • elrodw wrote: Or there's a devise which does the job without invoking the laws of magic and their sometimes-unpleasant side-effects...


    Yeah, I saw that one! but didn't the Commander defeat Royal Paine and destroy the Pacifier?

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote:

    elrodw wrote: Or there's a devise which does the job without invoking the laws of magic and their sometimes-unpleasant side-effects...


    Yeah, I saw that one! but didn't the Commander defeat Royal Paine and destroy the Pacifier?


    Glad to see I wasn't the only one thinking this :)
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  • lighttech wrote: Sooner or later the laws of magic would catch you!


    Until the day you truly fsck things up so badly that the Universe washes its hands of you, and delivers you a non-refundable, non-transferable, one-way ticket to GOO-ville.

    Circe probably knows a simple incantation that undoes one day of aging, for a given age, that only works once a day. By now, she may not even be aware that she's cast it before her morning coffee. Or there's enough Precedence behind it now that the aging subroutine call in her Pattern has been commented out.

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  • With her ties to Greek myth, it's possible that Circe was just given a chance to sample ambrosia, or was gifted immortality in some other way. I would imagine that receiving immortality as a gift would be far less likely to trigger a magical price than trying to take it for your own would.

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  • There have been some notes about whether Card Trick gets healed. Remember that Kayda healed the two scouts who got mind-fried by number-1 son; basically, cleaning the taint so their brains could 'start over'. It's very likely that the same could be done for Card Trick, although Unhcy's taint is apt to be a bit stronger (a LOT stronger) than that of his sons, so ...

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  • elrodw wrote: There have been some notes about whether Card Trick gets healed. Remember that Kayda healed the two scouts who got mind-fried by number-1 son; basically, cleaning the taint so their brains could 'start over'. It's very likely that the same could be done for Card Trick, although Unhcy's taint is apt to be a bit stronger (a LOT stronger) than that of his sons, so ...

    We shall see, Zur! We. Shall. See!!!!


    I figured at some point she would attempt it, and if you wanted us to know it will show up in a story.

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  • Practical Thread Necromancy for the win...

    ...wait, this probably got asked before somewhere, but if Lainie was pregnant (with twins) in Summer 2011, shouldn't the twins be pushing five in Gen2, instead of seven as stated? Or is this her second pregnancy and she miscarried due to the battle?

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  • Sir Lee wrote: Practical Thread Necromancy for the win...

    ...wait, this probably got asked before somewhere, but if Lainie was pregnant (with twins) in Summer 2011, shouldn't the twins be pushing five in Gen2, instead of seven as stated? Or is this her second pregnancy and she miscarried due to the battle?


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