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Question Would the Last One Out Please Turn Out The Lights!
- Yolandria
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Put your comments in the section below!
Mistress of the shelter for lost and redeemable Woobies!
- Malady
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And musing on that spoiler while away... Makes me think it might be
"Turning out the lights" makes me think someone's dying...
There's a medal... Wonder what's that about... Screw it, enough spec. Gonna go read...
... My gods... How many threads are there?? ... whateleyacademy.net/index.php/forum/spec...-101-story-arcs/1728
- elrodw
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It worked - after I did that, my muse was happy again, despite how this story went. I was going for the "Greek tragedy" style. May have worked, maybe not.
And now you know the context of the 'spoiler' I posted a few weeks ago, which someone guessed the meaning of. Should have known this community would do that - y'all are pretty observant.
Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
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My face after reading it all the way through.
Still a great story thanks elrodw!
- Katssun
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I laughed, I got misty-eyed. Let me see if I can get some highlights out of the way:
- Danny managing to keep the maleness going for four years...but now they have three daughters.
- Unchy's son was a hell of a lot slower than we expected! I was expecting something else by this point.
- Serious badass points for Catapult for a stellar debut, considering the circumstances.
- Kayda showing her shaman dominance.
- We knew the costs, from Laura's stories. But reading about it first hand hurt a lot more than I expected it to.
- Deb losing it, thinking Kayda got nuked.
- Lanie declaring that even pregnant, she won't abandon Kayda to something like this. (misty-eyed point #1)
- Kayda losing it, thinking Deb got killed.
- Card Trick's substantially tragic end (misty-eyed point #2)
- Kayda blaming herself, some things never change.
- Kayda running off to a particular hill to blame herself...wow things never change, do they?
- Walt's phone call to Mage Astre (misty-eyed point #3).
This is still a lot to process...
- JG
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- Kristin Darken
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It's in the "Newest 2nd Gen Stories" not the Original Timeline list, Joe.JG wrote: Huh. This one did not show up as published for me.
Fate guard you and grant you a Light to brighten your Way.
- Yolandria
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Mistress of the shelter for lost and redeemable Woobies!
- Valentine
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I guess we will have to wait for the next Laura story to find out what happened with the healing, and maybe with Val. (I object to the harming of characters named Val.)
A politically unified First Nations should scare the powers in charge. I wonder what the opinion of them is pertaining Native Hawaiians, Guamians(?), Samoans, etc. is?
Uncehgila finally got free, and it took a hell of a lot to stop him. This does bring up one thing that I have always disliked about comics and the way most of my friends run superhero games. When facing a potentially cataclysmic foe, why don't people call for support?
Kayda didn't have a chance, Lanie eventually did, but what was the SFL thinking? Admittedly none of the "nearby" teams, those in the Rockies, and Chicago area, are close enough to get there in time to help unless they have access to a teleporter, but if everything goes bad at least they are on the way. ARC has powered armor troops in orbit, presumably with the same sort of defenses as the HPARC armor had, but no one called them? Or Whateley? Someone is going to have clean the are, and it's likely to be ARC, with some help from Whateley.
Sorry but that is a pet peeve of mine.
It was a hell of a battle, and I wonder if we will ever find out if Catapult (was he in Absinthe II?) recovers. But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe. It's even likely that the Range Team would have steered him away from the tactic.
Overall a "good" story, well written and all that, but not particularly pleasant.
Don't Drick and Drive.
- Katssun
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It's somewhat scary that Carson knew he was capable of doing it, and encouraged the tactic almost nonchalantly. She's been running Lanie and Kayda though extradimensional horror gauntlets, so they're familiar with this kind of thing. Still, Carson has a good sense of how to combat Class X entities.Valentine wrote: But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe. It's even likely that the Range Team would have steered him away from the tactic.
Really makes you wonder, given how relatively cool she was fighting Unhcy, what in the Whateley tunnels took her and the board members?
- elrodw
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Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
- Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
Would The Last One Out Please Turn Out The Lights comments
Lanie and Kayda talking and it sounds like the twins might have manifested with the way Lanie is talking about them. Fey, Circe, and Kayda researched a way to remove the taint, if those three can't do it I don't know who can. And ouch, Kayda wanting to make this work no matter what to payback Tractor and Vanessa for all they did for her.
Awww, Kayda and Debra together still, so cute together. September 2011, a Seven Councils Fire, no wonder she has to leave. Dang, nice upgrades to the car since 2007 Kayda has made. 'Girl band' rock music is her favorite, interesting detail. Oh lord, she gained her love of fast driving from Lanie and has a 'diplomatic' license plate, eep.
HPARC, 55 Level, Security Point 3. Kelly Roberts, male security guard in a power suit deep underground, hears a crumpling sound, never a good sign. Herb Sulley, one of his partners, and a third guy, force field breach at that far underground in that facility, very bad doesn't begin to cover it. The last of Unhcegila's sons is alive and was contained down there from the sounds of it, killed the 3rd unnamed guard, yikes. And he is trying to knock out the power relays for level 55 and the lower levels with that stunt! Herb trying to hold off the monster, while Kelly tries to get the isolation doors to drop, this is one of the worst possible situations. Kelly having his visor up doomed him from looking at Unhcegila's son, while Herb is fighting for his life.
Ernst Schmidt having to come in and find out it is a worse case scenario or close to it at least. Basically in the dark about what is happening on level 55 and below, and Unhcegila's son was frozen down there and somehow broke free. Moving down, sounds like he is trying to free daddy again.
Blind in one eye and one arm useless, Unhcegila's son is banged up and ticked off. Oh crud, one missed ventilation shaft and he gets through, don't tell me Unhcegila gets loose and is the one who attacked the Sioux Falls League. Sure sounds like it.
Already at level 70, this is worse case scenario. Just how many there die in the escape. Darts that can penetrate some points in Unh's son's hide, dang. Eep, all those units and force field generators offline. Wait, finally broke through, does that mean he wasn't frozen this whole time and they stalled him this long from getting inside. That close to retirement and this happens, it is like the universe just loves to mess with people. And wait for him to come back up, bad idea, he won't until he frees daddy and it will be very bad if that happens.
Oh crud, that is what stopped his attempt back in 2007, magical barrier Unhcegila's son couldn't penetrate but daddy might be able to. And the tunnel that close to finished, uh oh, they definitely escape at this rate.
Call to the DPA to authorize extreme response, one which will doom everyone in the psych ward. Omega contingency, all that, all those codes, plus 3 keys to use it. Detonation, just what are they setting off that could take out everything down there and the whole place from the way Ernst is talking.
Good grief, that Omega contingency makes a normal nuke look weak from the sounds of it. And d'oh! Unhcegila's spawn in his rampage ruin it, one little wire not going off at the right time.
Fort Pierre, South Dakota. All those meetings for poor Kayda, having to deal with squabbles. Good reasons to have the conclave there, can't imagine the expense involved without rich individual's help. Dang, Kayda wanting the two warriors to just kill each other and do that, she is very frustrated and annoyed. Too bad she has to stop it, might knock some sense into the rest seeing her let it happen and show her disapproval. EmilyWalks-Far, Anne Roaring-Fire, Suzie White-Peaks, and Christy Black-Rabbit are Kayda's attendants. All goods friends to her and Suzie is even from the Crow tribe, things have changed.
Dang, showing up like that and showing upset she is with them disrespecting the peace of the council's fire she called, these two are going to have trouble with gaining any respect for a while. The Iroquois warrior refuses to listen to her, calling Kayda just a Lakota woman. Idiot saying him being tripped wasn't an accident, won't back down from an insult. And refusing to fight Kayda, so she spits at his feet. Taken down by Kayda in one move and shown he can't fight back against her hold, he apologizes, he needs to learn to control that temper of his.
Kayda wants all the tribes to stand together and present a united voice, to be a true political force. Wait, I can understand Grizzly wanting them all to unite, but Coyote as well, that spirit is very hard to understand sometimes. Trusting in each other, not hating, if they would just listen to her the People would be nearly unstoppable. Laneth becomes one of Kayda's teachers, didn't see that coming. 4 years ago, meaning back in 2007, they have been friends a long time by this point, plus training by Mr. Two Knives, awesome. Anne teasing Emily about a boy she likes, dang, girl talk differently when they just among each other.
Unhcegila free and heading towards Kayda, then plans to go after the World Tree, oh boy. And killed his injured 3rd son just so he could spawn new 3 sons. Traveling only at night to conserve essence, at least it will him longer to reach her that way. And he near to them, planning to kill all the shamans well along with Kayda, hope Kayda is ready for him.
Shrugged off two Hellfire missiles, Unhcegila is a nightmare for even military weapons to deal with. That General Roland is dealing with a threat this huge and still stands on rules and protocol still, ugh. Having to go through all those channels just to get a weapon to kill Unhcegila, yet General Roland thinks a ground burst of the weapon would kill more, he has never dealt with a Class X entity of this level before. 200 kiloton yield, yeah, without the right magic that might kill Unhcegila.
Wait, it is 2011 in September. Since Danny started Whateley in 2007, shouldn't he be at Whateley right now for his last year of school? And 3 year old Brenda, bet she is a little cutie.
Oh crap, this is how the Sioux Falls League gets called in to deal with Unhcegila. Debra calling Kayda to find out if she is okay and warn her. They would kill Kayda and everyone there without giving her to a chance to stop this monster. Tells how dangerous Unhcegila is. Guessing that didn't happen since Kayda is still alive in 2016, but how many are lost before the snake demon is stopped.
Farm Boy, Ping Pong, Twinkletoes, Cornflower, Vanity Girl, Card Trick, and Tractor, all exposed to this Class X entity and fought it, no wonder Vanessa came out so bad. Goggles that filter out Class X imagery, genius. Catapult, recent graduate from Whateley and intern, talk about a nightmare intern job with what is happening. Tractor telling the poor kid about Unhcegila and what they know about him, eep. Can see why Debra is freaking out, even though the plane is okay, when every second counts you want to be there an hour ago.
Aww, Lanie trying to go and meet Kayda and taking a plane, wanting to be in the cockpit due to her mechanical and technological interest. And she knows what is going on and forces the pilot to land at the airport despite it being closed airspace, when Kayda is in trouble you can't keep her away. I would pity the whole National Guard if they tried to. Class 5 air marshal, she has gotten an upgrade in class over the years.
All those sweat lodge ceremonies, bringing peace between all the People is hard work. Doli is there, Kayda wishing to catch up with her later. Talking to the women about the concept of two spirits, getting through the European concept and straight to the old belief. Dang, European culture and concepts messed up the People about two spirits. The belief is one of the most enlightened ones I've ever heard on the matter.
Dam it! Unhcegila already there and one of the warriors out after looking at him. Fired upon but not even making a dent and he rips through all the warriors there, yikes. And now attacking sweat lodges to kill shamans and any other of the People in the same area.
Nice costume on Lanie, is that stuff really silver or is it mithril perhaps, would make sense to fight Unhcegila with stuff made of mithril. Pregnant with 2nd child and as Wicked she bolts straight towards the chaos.
And Kayda senses him now, warning everyone to run and not look at it. Emily is smart, bringing Kayda her weapons, holdouts, and tools. Poor Emily having to leave the person she swore to protect and a true friend, even as Kayda joins the fight.
And Danny arrives, Wihinape telling him it is Unhcegila and he transforms into his cat boy/man form, ready for action.
Kayda versus Unhcegila, been a long time coming. Goading him into fighting out of instinct, Kayda learned a lot while at Whateley. Ouch, even fighting angry Unh's is one tough bugger to deal with. Yikes, badly hurt yet she gets in a good hit by channeling magic through her knife as well. *eyes bug out* I knew he was a lot more powerful than his sons but this is brutal.
Danny tries to attack the snake demon, tries to claw one of his eyes out, only to get hit hard as well. This is going very badly.
And now Sioux Falls League shows up, parachuting right into the fray, Debra out first. Hope they can turn the tide of battle.
Oh god, all of those warriors rushing in including Kayda's In'oka guard, plus seeing Danny in the fray. 3 dead that fast and the others just trying to distract him from the Ptesanwi. A ball of light to blind him, smart move by Kayda, even with a broken left arm she is still in this fight. And Kayda hit again, this time in the thigh, by his wild thrashing. It is a war of survival, too many have already died or had their minds destroyed.
Magical flare made Debra think Strangelove had been dropped and went off already, poor girl. Don fires a massive lightning bolt from a devise and it only seemed to be slowing down Unhcegila, nightmare fuel is an understatement for what Unhcegila is.
Debra holding an injured Kayda, helping them both escape from the snake demon with an incredible leap. Crud, Ping Pong blast a fireball but it just gets him knocked off his feet by the tail, alongside Debra and Kayda. Ping Pong is torn apart by the nightmare monster, this is the risk of being a superhero but it is still shocking to see happen. And Debra severely injured, you are really showing what a nightmare Unhcegila is with this fight, elrod.
Card Trick having to deal with seeing Ping Pong rip to shreds right in front of her, while Farm Boy tries to distract Unhcegila and Vanity Girl trying to snap Card Trick out of it as she cast a sunburst spell and warns the others first. Catapult launching a chunk of stone at speeds exceeding Mach 12 where it vaporized into plasma harming Unhy, dang.
Oh come on, regen equal to a Regen 6 on the mutant scale and healing from taking his worst wound yet, how to put him down. At least Twinkletoes got Debra away from the fray. Oh boy, seeing Debra take a hit like that, thinking that she will die and Kayda can't save her, causes the poor woman to fly into a rage.
Darn, doing such a big attack it takes time for Catapult to regain his strength, meaning Unhy will recover by the time he can hit him again. Darn it! Hits with another attack like that and he has his magic shield up so it does a lot less damage. Tractor having to adapt his attack to account for Kayda, good he can think on his feet. And thanks to Kayda weakening Unhy's magical defenses Tractor's attack hits him hard.
Arrggh! Unhy just takes the huge pole out and batters Tractor with, the wound already starting to heal. A warhead of C-4 explosives on an arrow from Lanie hits Unhy in an eye, hope it does some real damage.
Going after Vanity Girl since her sunburst spells are burning away his protective essence, tossing Danny off him in the huge spasm caused by the explosion. And this is where things go from horrible to worse.
Vanity Girl bringing up that protective shield so far, nice. And the shield is down fast, Farm Boy trying to rush to the rescue. Darn it! Vanity Girl pushed in front of his body and stabbing pain, Farm Boy used his own body to push them out of the way which means he was struck as well.
Tractor tearing Unhy's forearm off like that, you know things are bad to make him enraged. And Farm Boy crumpling, don't tell me he is dead too.
Lanie rushing in to save Kayda, told it is too dangerous there. Kayda senses Lanie is pregnant with twins, saying Lanie owes them a future. But Lanie won't leave Kayda, even touching a jewel on one of the vambraces and talks of calling in an old marker.
Ouch, Tractor taking more damage than he is giving despite his PK field. Only damage from Kayda's knife isn't healing, at least they have that going for them. Oh crap, devisor goggles stop working, Twinkletoes trying to heal Debra, focusing on bringing Farm Boy to safety since he is out.
Crud, Kayda feeling like she is a failure as Ptesanwi. Lady Astarte showing up through a portal and giving goggles by Done, this is epic. Card Trick telling her sun-type energy hurts him the most, even though with her magic scepter she was able to hurt him. Noooo! Sunburst hit him but it was her goggles which failed and her mind is gone.
Danny trying to fight Unhy, Lanie out of arrows and trying to fight him with adamantium claws, but barely able to cut through his hide. Don's particle cannon out of energy, laser gun broken and helping Twinkletoes with tending to the injured. Kayda hits him hard by pumping in all her essence, then Lady Astarte telling Catapult to use something akin to a black hole inside Unhy, hope it works. Dang, tearing him up apart from the inside, the heroes having to fight against the gravitational forces.
Unhy sealed into a pocket dimension of Lady Astarte's creation after being collapsed by a black hole by Catapult, truly epic. The gateway into it sealed into HPARC facility hopefully with stronger defenses and wards to keep him in if he somehow escapes the pocket dimension. Carson calling in Warpers to get everyone to Doyle, this was only one of three markers Lanie has with Carson she can call in.
Kayda not wishing to leave Vanessa's side even though she needs treatment too, hard to find a true friend like her. Having to sedate Twinkletoes and Catapult, doubt they will ever fully recover from this. And Debra finding out Vanity girl is paralyzed from the waist down. Farm Boy dead as well, Card Trick in a permanent vegetative state. Danny stunt in catboy form for now. And Kayda burned out her well in that fight, no more magic, even Carson can't relight it. How will they treat the taint for everyone, how will they survive with their wounds if they can't heal.
Oh god, Kayda is broken right now, can't feel her magic or her spirits, can't help anyone, even herself. This fight left a scar on all of them. Circe wants to see Kayda and Dr. Tenent, hope something can be done. A ritual to relight Kayda's well, hope it works. Lanie stating she will carry Kayda if she has to, wanting to know Kayda will be okay before going back to the gathering to salvage what they can.
Circe, Ms. Grimes, Mrs. Carson and Dr. Tenent, dang, if this doesn't work nothing short of an act of god will. Thinking Coyote is right and blaming herself for everything that happened. Oh boy, having to use spell they used to fight the taint on Skybolt's piercings, this is going to be a major working. Having to do all this so Kayda can relight her well, that is a heroic undertaking. Nearly an hour later before she is taken back to Doyle, her well relit and everyone exhausted, brutal.
Kayda is as stubborn as ever about healing Debra first over herself, hehe. Stuck in catgirl form despite the taint being removed, poor Danny is going to need a lot therapy. And yeah, after that fight most superheroes would retire. Lanie went back to heal people and restart the unification talks, hope it works after all this. Kayda made a member of one other tribe and talk of being made a member of another already because she saved those women with her actions.
Dang, Tractor blaming himself because he pursued her, move to Sioux Falls and join the League. Can't live your life asking 'what if', wondering what might have happened, or it will paralyze you, stop you from acting. Seeing Tractor like that, almost anyone would want to comfort him.
Kayda back up on that small hill at Whateley again, Mrs. Carson having to remind her it took all of them to beat Unhcegila. Farm Boy and Ping Pong dead, Valerie's mind gone. Saying that if they hadn't stopped him a thermonuclear bomb would have been dropped and a lot more dead doesn't make Kayda feel better. Ouch, saying everyone would have been better off if she never became the Ptesanwi. If it hadn't been Kayda, someone else would have been the Ptesanwi and it still would have happened.
Ouch, Kayda talking to Vanessa, crying because she couldn't heal her so she can walk again. And being told Jake thinks of Kayda as a little sister, poor Vanessa needing him to be strong for her, to not blame himself. *eyes bug out* Dang, that is a lot to unload on Kayda, saying they had been thinking about retiring, where Jake would teach, starting a family. Ovaries were contaminated, can never have children, heartbreaking. All those fears Vanessa has, makes me want to somehow assure her.
A ceremony on Battleship South Dakota Memorial, Sioux Falls. Everyone she messed up by one ancient evil, comforting each other. 10 days and Danica hasn't been able to change back to normal Danny. Charlie Lodgeman and Mrs. Carson there to support them. Governor giving a speech, politician expression. A special award as recognition for what they did in defeating Unhcegila. South Dakota Medals of Valor, the first and only ones to the heroes who fought Unhcegila.
Oh brother, all that by the governor and saying lines like that for good press. After the hell these heroes went through, the scars they have, the medals and ceremony almost seem like a slap in the face with him using it to play to the press. Idiot reporters saying something like that, after the hell they went through to save their lives, sickening. And Tractor, I would have done the same thing in his place. Lady Astarte having to put him to sleep and the other dignitaries knowing his words had more than a grain of truth to them.
Dang, having to inter Farm Boy and Ping Pong's remains in the maximum Class X isolation level of HPARC, hard for their family and friends to deal with. And poor Card Trick. When even Lady Astarte has problems dealing with something, it is 'oh-shit' level of threat. Poor Walt having to deal with all this as the team leader, it is no wonder he disbanded the team.
Walt calling Brigitte, telling her what happened, he is done being a hero. And their team is talking about disbanded, lost Flamme Bleu two years ago, ouch. And Walt wants to be with Brigitte, at least he is acting on it finally. Jake and Vanessa retiring as well, Kayda and Debra not wanting to lose the other. Figuring want to do next, at least Danica is starting to be able to turn back to Danny again, even if it is limited and highly draining.
Shutting down the Sioux Falls League HQ, wondering if someone else will use it in the future. And a memorial in the entrance, to John Hastings aka Farm Boy, David Wilson aka Ping Pong and Valerie Hinson aka Card Trick. This story had the most brutal fight, the most tragic deaths and loses, and showed the end of an era, the end of the Sioux Falls League and what caused it. I will say it again elrod, you sold Unhcegila as a true nightmare monster and did so very well.
Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.

- Katssun
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I can't speak for the rest of us, but I was frankly a bit numb by that point.elrodw wrote: I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.
The phone call to Brigette and the followup discussion with whoever was left hit me the hardest. The absences were keenly felt.
- elrodw
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Katssun wrote:
I can't speak for the rest of us, but I was frankly a bit numb by that point.elrodw wrote: I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.
The phone call to Brigette and the followup discussion with whoever was left hit me the hardest. The absences were keenly felt.
I had to write it in sections to avoid overloading myself, even though I knew what was happening and going to happen. And if I read it, parts still choke me up.
Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
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Well all things considered, i think we can rule Sara out now, she is younger, and wouldn't necessarily be as powerful as Daddy Snake, so I am betting some sort of temporal anomaly or something. and it isn't a matter of where they are but rather WHEN they areKatssun wrote:
It's somewhat scary that Carson knew he was capable of doing it, and encouraged the tactic almost nonchalantly. She's been running Lanie and Kayda though extradimensional horror gauntlets, so they're familiar with this kind of thing. Still, Carson has a good sense of how to combat Class X entities.Valentine wrote: But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe. It's even likely that the Range Team would have steered him away from the tactic.
Really makes you wonder, given how relatively cool she was fighting Unhcy, what in the Whateley tunnels took her and the board members?
Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
- Valentine
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elrodw wrote: I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.
I think that knowing already that the SFL had broken up blunted the impact.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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I suppose that that's technically true...The story with this little bit is now completed and at my editors for cleanup, then it's in the queue.
BTW, it's a Gen 2 story.
It's impactful, but in a quiet contemplative way that doesn't lend itself well to sharing. At least, that's what it was like for me.elrodw wrote: I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.
By shear coincidence, my music was playing The Highwayman as I reached the conclusion here. The subject matter is different, but I felt that it set the mood quite well.
I'd say that there's a number of related reasons. At the core I'd say that the problem is isolation. The Sioux Falls League was a highly competent team covering a fairly large area on their own. They would rarely have the opportunity or the necessity to deal with other teams. This means three things. First is that when they're rushing into a fight at full speed they simply don't have the instinct to call for other teams. Secondly, without a strong working relationship with the other teams, they're probably not going to be able to mobilize them rapidly. We saw the difficulty Ernst had dealing with the general. While getting another team to help probably wouldn't be pulling teeth like that was, it's not as simple as flying a Batsignal. Finally, they might not be aware of how prepared the other teams are for dealing with a Class X threat. Unless you know that the other teams have the defenses to not be instantly mind-wiped and the strength to deal Snakey damage then all you're doing is getting a team of good people killed and stripping an area of its heroes to buy you a little bit of cannon fodder. Heck, I'm amazed that they let Catapult join them. I'm guessing that if they'd had a little bit more time to consider, or if he had anything other than a blisteringly powerful long-range powerset, he would have stayed behind.When facing a potentially cataclysmic foe, why don't people call for support?
It's unlikely that what-ever-it-was in the tunnels was a chump. But that doesn't necessarily mean that it was as powerful as Snakey in a cage match. Here, Carson had the benefit of knowing that she was walking into a foxtrot before she got there. All it takes is the right attack coming from an angle that she hadn't anticipated and catching her flatfooted, and poof. As Eldritch said, "Always fear the lucky idiot with a gun. He may be an idiot, but he's still lucky and he has a gun." Heck, we don't even know if what got them was a thing at all! For all we know the tunnels shifted from the strain of being bent through non-Euclidean space, and Carson and the board simply got caught in a pocket section separated from real space.Katssun wrote: Really makes you wonder, given how relatively cool she was fighting Unhcy, what in the Whateley tunnels took her and the board members?
"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
- Valentine
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Arcanist Lupus wrote:
I'd say that there's a number of related reasons. At the core I'd say that the problem is isolation. The Sioux Falls League was a highly competent team covering a fairly large area on their own. They would rarely have the opportunity or the necessity to deal with other teams. This means three things. First is that when they're rushing into a fight at full speed they simply don't have the instinct to call for other teams. Secondly, without a strong working relationship with the other teams, they're probably not going to be able to mobilize them rapidly. We saw the difficulty Ernst had dealing with the general. While getting another team to help probably wouldn't be pulling teeth like that was, it's not as simple as flying a Batsignal. Finally, they might not be aware of how prepared the other teams are for dealing with a Class X threat. Unless you know that the other teams have the defenses to not be instantly mind-wiped and the strength to deal Snakey damage then all you're doing is getting a team of good people killed and stripping an area of its heroes to buy you a little bit of cannon fodder. Heck, I'm amazed that they let Catapult join them. I'm guessing that if they'd had a little bit more time to consider, or if he had anything other than a blisteringly powerful long-range powerset, he would have stayed behind.When facing a potentially cataclysmic foe, why don't people call for support?
There are extenuating circumstances, here. First the SFL is known for interning new heroes. Both Catapult, and Valerie were interns. So they would have contacts amongst other teams. Second, the
Like I said though, it's a pet peeve of mine.
Don't Drick and Drive.
- null0trooper
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Valentine wrote: It was a hell of a battle, and I wonder if we will ever find out if Catapult (was he in Absinthe II?) recovers. But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe. It's even likely that the Range Team would have steered him away from the tactic.
Consider the hard x-ray radiation from matter being heated up as it falls in: probably not an effect that's very welcome on the Ranges (just ask Tennyo!). It could be that data from powers testing and the simulators had been extrapolated to "this kid could maybe pull that off", followed by "What do we do then?"
I suspect that the remainder of the simulation results translated to: "You're asking a kid straight out of high school to warp space into a topology that makes reality cry. Unless their name is Sara Waite, Joshette Gillman, or Ecila Mason, they might need a lot of quiet time to recover." Even if that isn't a problem, he's still just found out that if he loses his grip on his sanity and his powers he could potentially eradicate the planet.
Katssun wrote: Really makes you wonder, given how relatively cool she was fighting Unhcy, what in the Whateley tunnels took her and the board members?
Maybe the pocket dimension's containment field started failing, and oops, Daddy Unhce's been busy with the Class X spawning features?
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Malady wrote: Well, the other thread... Which is now gone for some reason, said it was a spoilers?
It got moderated, someone hadn't seen that the story had been released and thought that I had found the story through illegitimate means. On second thought I put the Kayda tag as a spoiler because I hadn't read it yet and I didn't want someone to read the first message and then be spoiled an eventual surprise in case the fact that it was a kayda story wasn't something they were expecting (I wasn't expecting a Kayda Gen2 story).
So now that I have read it, I can reiterate my thanks to you Elrodw.
For some reason I hadn't immediatly picked up on the fact that it was a flashback, so it was strange for a moment. (and I am too ashamed to admit at which point in the story I realized it.) It was very emotional, I particularly liked the public speech scene.
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What I'm hoping gets recognized, however, is the importance of distributed battery backups and/or close-on-failure doors in emergency lockdown systems. It's understandable to skimp on that for a small structure, but with a stretched out massively deep containment facility for Big Baddies like this? Criminal negligence. I mean, I get that the original design for the place probably tunnel-visioned on keeping things in and forgot to account for what happens if a higher level gets wiped out first to decapitate the lower levels, but by this point they've known for at least four years that Snake-Daddy had powerful outside help trying to bust in and should have corrected that oversight.
But hey, that oversight only cost them several hundred lives. Live and learn, right?
I'm also a bit surprised that they left Louie's tunnel unfilled. Maybe we'll see what's up with that in the ongoing Gen1 Kayda stories. I'm guessing they were leaving it there it as a trap.
Oh jeez.Arcanist Lupus wrote: By shear coincidence, my music was playing The Highwayman as I reached the conclusion here.
I disagree. It's a pretty natural thing to think of if you have gravity based powers that can apply absurd g-forces. It's just the bread-and-butter technique of crushing your enemies with gravity taken to the extreme.Valentine wrote: But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe.
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Monica apparently generates them in mid-air routinely as part of her fighting techniques, but she certainly doesn't do it inside people. From what we've seen, she's generally pretty scared of what direct application of her power does to things and people.Kettlekorn wrote:
I disagree. It's a pretty natural thing to think of if you have gravity based powers that can apply absurd g-forces. It's just the bread-and-butter technique of crushing your enemies with gravity taken to the extreme.Valentine wrote: But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe.
Misty...she certainly goes way too far when she's in a panic berserk state, but I don't think she can make black holes.
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Monica apparently generates them in mid-air routinely as part of her fighting techniques, but she certainly doesn't do it inside people. From what we've seen, she's generally pretty scared of what direct application of her power does to things and people.Kettlekorn wrote:
I disagree. It's a pretty natural thing to think of if you have gravity based powers that can apply absurd g-forces. It's just the bread-and-butter technique of crushing your enemies with gravity taken to the extreme.Valentine wrote: But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe.
Misty...she certainly goes way too far when she's in a panic berserk state, but I don't think she can make black holes.
Neither does Tennyo, even though she can make them.
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Regards calling in others - they knew that sonny's gaze was bad ganja; if Don hadn't made enough devisor goggles, then calling in heavy reinforcements wouldn't do much good. If they gazed at him, they're toast. He took a Hellfire missile without blinking. And up until someone actually encountered him, no-one had any idea of how much more bad-ass Uncy was than his little boys. They found the answer - a HELL of a lot more bad-ass.
There's another factor at work here. It was 4 years from the last activity of Uncy-junior. Despite best awareness and training, that's time for people to lose their edge about a particular potential threat. would they have made plans in 07? Yes. How relevant are those in '11? Unsure, if anyone can even find them. Teams they had arrangements with? May be changed, or disbanded, or something like that. Remember - time is the enemy of preparedness.
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I can't speak for the rest of us, but I was frankly a bit numb by that point.elrodw wrote: I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.
The phone call to Brigette and the followup discussion with whoever was left hit me the hardest. The absences were keenly felt.
I had to write it in sections to avoid overloading myself, even though I knew what was happening and going to happen. And if I read it, parts still choke me up.
*slowpoke mode enabled*
I hadn't even made the connection between the title and the last scene. Congrats Elrodw.
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I disagree. It's a pretty natural thing to think of if you have gravity based powers that can apply absurd g-forces. It's just the bread-and-butter technique of crushing your enemies with gravity taken to the extreme.Valentine wrote: But no one other than a super experienced hero, a sadist, or Jade would think of creating a black hole in a foe.
Phrasing it that way reminds me of Mass Effect Singularities !

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Malady wrote: Well, the other thread... Which is now gone for some reason, said it was a spoilers?
On second thought I put the Kayda tag as a spoiler because I hadn't read it yet and I didn't want someone to read the first message and then be spoiled an eventual surprise in case the fact that it was a kayda story wasn't something they were expecting (I wasn't expecting a Kayda Gen2 story).
Yeah, I didn't know that, so it just made it more interesting to me! Although, as she comes in right at the beginning, it's not actually a spoiler? Or a FirstEpisodeSpoiler, if one?
Esar wrote: For some reason I hadn't immediatly picked up on the fact that it was a flashback, so it was strange for a moment. (and I am too ashamed to admit at which point in the story I realized it.) It was very emotional, I particularly liked the public speech scene.
Same! ... I really should pay attention to the timestamps as well!


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When the goggles failed, I was like, OH SHIT! and then I thought it might be Carson, and her magic might save her, but no...
I actually missed the hint from Dr. Barton with Laura that they disbanded!

Not as emotionally invested in the SFL as other people, so not as sad? Or I don't tear up as easily, either or...
I thought it might have been Vox, at first, 'cause I was like "What's her last name again? *Wiki* Oh!... Jackson... So, not her..."
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Oh jeez.Arcanist Lupus wrote: By shear coincidence, my music was playing The Highwayman as I reached the conclusion here.
Aren't Irish ballads fun?
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The emotional turmoil that was the stuff in Doyle Complex dulled my senses by the time I got to the end. In fact, I kind of just skim the last paragraph without really reading it until you posted above. Yes, it has impact but there's so much stuff battering the reader before it that I barely registered the last paragraph.elrodw wrote: I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.
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Malady wrote: I actually missed the hint from Dr. Barton with Laura that they disbanded!
Not as emotionally invested in the SFL as other people, so not as sad? Or I don't tear up as easily, either or...
I thought it might have been Vox, at first, 'cause I was like "What's her last name again? *Wiki* Oh!... Jackson... So, not her..."
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And you think that I might NOT have something planned for the Bartons in Gen 2, such that fixing her in Gen 1.5 would ruin that perfectly good plot?

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Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]- Confirmation that Fey is alive (and well?) in 2016.
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Actually that was confirmed in Islands In the Sun
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Otherself wrote: I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities, why not have her on speed dial? (Is she traveling among the stars? Is she in another plane of existance?) The fact that she's a demoneater is known to Whateley Security, which means that Mrs Carson knows as well, CIA probably knows as well, I mean, why not call her? She can even teleport so as long as she's on the planet she can come to help at moment notice. What about using her (or Sara, if she's aviable) to dispose the Evil rather than just keeping it sealed in a can?
You're right, if Tennyo were alive and on Earth that would be the logical thing, wouldn't it?
But would you really want to read that story? Oh? Ok, well here ya go. The guard yawned in the over watch satilite when the alarm began to sound. "Localize," he managed around a second yawn and thought about what flavor coffee he'd get from the Kuerig next trip.
"HPARC Level 55," the computer replied. "Threat level Class X."
Maybe a donut? he through as he scratched his junk and wondered if those assholes from day shift left any. "Release Agent T."
"Authorized." The computer replied. "Enroute. Threat neutralized. Situation normal."
The guard stood, stretched and scratched his ass. "I'm gonna go take a dump, Central. Auto mode."
"Auto mode confirmed. Would you like a musical selection to defecate to?"
"Are you kidding?" The guard replied. "I'm barely awake as it is!"
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Thinking about the last scene with Danica/Danny they seem to have come to accept both sides of themselves. I'm not sure if that is character development we haven't seen yet (as this takes place well beyond any of the current stories) or whether it is just them being overwhelmed by the situation.
You might wonder why I bring this up, and really it is just that I had a thought for an interesting turn for the character and was going to see if anyone else agreed with the validity of it.
Danny/Danica starts out hating their female side, but most people in Poe come to accept it as a part of their life. Not everyone, it wouldn't make sense for everyone, but most. And they have the advantage of being able to be either at any time.
So what if over the years Danica/Danny started to not only accept but embrace the ability to flip flop forms across the gender divide (an ability I'm quite jealous of). To the point where they realise they are somewhere on the genderfluid spectrum (yes this is me shamelessly looking for representation where there isn't any [not that there is none at this site in this particular character], I'm part of like 4 invisible minorities I don't get a bunch of characters I can identify with) and now they've lost that ability.
I'd love to see them go through a second journey of discovery where they start looking into fashions, hair styles, and binders that can make them look male or androgynous even though their form isn't. Have people be surprised that they lost the power to change forms because they put some work in and then just carried on like nothing happened.
I'm sorry for my shameless speculation but I like Danny/Danica and their struggle to find an identity. Thye have the support their sister so they don't fall into deppression. Also they can be a cute kitty person, who doesn't like kitty people (other than you know people who are allergic to cats).
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Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]Laura babysat Wyatt and Lanie's kids, she must be good to keep three kids wrangled. Twin make her think of Jack-Jack from The Incredibles, just how old are they where she thinks they are too young to have manifested yet?
I expect that you already got the answer later in the story, but for anyone who didn't catch it:
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Otherself wrote: I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities, why not have her on speed dial? (Is she traveling among the stars? Is she in another plane of existance?)
As I understand it, demons themselves aren't Class X entities. However, I'm not sure I'd want the responsibility for letting Tennyo know there's an all-you-can-eat buffet in South Dakota.
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Other than Tennyo being a weapon of ultimate last resort, there's also the potential problem "Is she on the planet?"Otherself wrote: I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities, why not have her on speed dial? (Is she traveling among the stars? Is she in another plane of existance?) The fact that she's a demoneater is known to Whateley Security, which means that Mrs Carson knows as well, CIA probably knows as well, I mean, why not call her? She can even teleport so as long as she's on the planet she can come to help at moment notice. What about using her (or Sara, if she's aviable) to dispose the Evil rather than just keeping it sealed in a can?
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Actually that was confirmed in Islands In the Sun
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I think the difference is, for you as the writer possessing the entire continuity inside your mind, including both before and after the events, meaning that that's the point in the writing where the emotional impact of the group falling apart appears to you. For me, and I'd assume most of the rest of the readers, we only get to see the continuity as it gets released. We already knew from "Not in Kansas" that the SFL had broken up, via heavy deaths and consequences. So the emotional impact isn't coming at the same place for us, as the emotional impact that the league was disbanded came from what amounts to a throwaway line coming from the Bartons talking to Laura as "In the past, we were part of a group. It ended". The focus on those scenes is Laura adjusting to Whateley, not finding out new events from old friends.Katssun wrote:
I can't speak for the rest of us, but I was frankly a bit numb by that point.elrodw wrote: I'm surprised no-one has commented on the last paragraph, the one that's like the closing of a book. That's the one that had the most emotional impact for me.
And as Katssun said, we were a bit numb from the fight and hospital drama. The end of the league is kinda expected after that turmoil, even if we didn't already know about it happening.
Still a very good, very emotional story, but that was my two pennies for why responses weren't lining up for your expectation for that scene.
In regards to the discussion on what music to listen to while reading, I personally was strolling through Kingdom Hearts piano collections. There was quite a bit of soundtrack dissonance during the fight, but the fallout scenes? Yeah...
In regards to the fear of WHAT took out Carson? I'm seconding (or thirding? Fourthing?) the idea of a hull breach in the pocket dimension. We know from A Tenuous Blade that Nimbus/Hekete's Master (I can't recall ATM) is fooling around down there, maybe he, or some equipment he leaves behind, recognises the demon aura leaking from the dimension, and tries to summon it?
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Esar wrote: And yet it isn't in the art gallery (I have just seen it too after reading your post). Maybe it is taking every image on the site for its rotation ?
I've seen numerous avatar pictures picked up, including my own, so I think you're right about that.
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Malady wrote: Woah. Just saw the Plaque in the Art Rotation! So. Much. Spoilers?
There is a critical file in the art gallery which has the index, mouse-over, and full captions for the art gallery drawings. If that file doesn't list a picture, it won't be displayed. I'm working on updating the gallery. Meanwhile, it shows up in the random images though, which operates off different package than the full-up gallery.
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E. E. Nalley wrote:
Otherself wrote: I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities, why not have her on speed dial? (Is she traveling among the stars? Is she in another plane of existance?) The fact that she's a demoneater is known to Whateley Security, which means that Mrs Carson knows as well, CIA probably knows as well, I mean, why not call her? She can even teleport so as long as she's on the planet she can come to help at moment notice. What about using her (or Sara, if she's aviable) to dispose the Evil rather than just keeping it sealed in a can?
You're right, if Tennyo were alive and on Earth that would be the logical thing, wouldn't it?
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But would you really want to read that story? Oh? Ok, well here ya go. The guard yawned in the over watch satilite when the alarm began to sound. "Localize," he managed around a second yawn and thought about what flavor coffee he'd get from the Kuerig next trip.
"HPARC Level 55," the computer replied. "Threat level Class X."
Maybe a donut? he through as he scratched his junk and wondered if those assholes from day shift left any. "Release Agent T."
"Authorized." The computer replied. "Enroute. Threat neutralized. Situation normal."
The guard stood, stretched and scratched his ass. "I'm gonna go take a dump, Central. Auto mode."
"Auto mode confirmed. Would you like a musical selection to defecate to?"
"Are you kidding?" The guard replied. "I'm barely awake as it is!"
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Anyway, I think I might have a mundane solution that might help getting rid of this particular Class X entity, Stuff it in a rocket and fire it in the Sun, while it was still a bigg ass snake demon popsicle it was too dangerous to do it, but while it is trapped inside the pocket dimension Mrs Carson created it might be safe enough to do. It might be worth a try.
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Otherself wrote:
E. E. Nalley wrote:
Otherself wrote: I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities, why not have her on speed dial? (Is she traveling among the stars? Is she in another plane of existance?) The fact that she's a demoneater is known to Whateley Security, which means that Mrs Carson knows as well, CIA probably knows as well, I mean, why not call her? She can even teleport so as long as she's on the planet she can come to help at moment notice. What about using her (or Sara, if she's aviable) to dispose the Evil rather than just keeping it sealed in a can?
You're right, if Tennyo were alive and on Earth that would be the logical thing, wouldn't it?
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But would you really want to read that story? Oh? Ok, well here ya go. The guard yawned in the over watch satilite when the alarm began to sound. "Localize," he managed around a second yawn and thought about what flavor coffee he'd get from the Kuerig next trip.
"HPARC Level 55," the computer replied. "Threat level Class X."
Maybe a donut? he through as he scratched his junk and wondered if those assholes from day shift left any. "Release Agent T."
"Authorized." The computer replied. "Enroute. Threat neutralized. Situation normal."
The guard stood, stretched and scratched his ass. "I'm gonna go take a dump, Central. Auto mode."
"Auto mode confirmed. Would you like a musical selection to defecate to?"
"Are you kidding?" The guard replied. "I'm barely awake as it is!"
......Come on, give me some credit, it doesn't take a rocket scientist to understand that there wouldn't be a story if Tennyo simply came and ate the opponent, but it's still a bit jarring how Tennyo is completely ignored, at the end the heroes seal the Evil in a can hoping it will be able to keep it sealed, not keep it sealed long enough for Tennyo to be aviable, not even a "I wish she could be here"...... She's treated as she never existed, and that's what left me wondering why.
Anyway, I think I might have a mundane solution that might help getting rid of this particular Class X entity, Stuff it in a rocket and fire it in the Sun, while it was still a bigg ass snake demon popsicle it was too dangerous to do it, but while it is trapped inside the pocket dimension Mrs Carson created it might be safe enough to do. It might be worth a try.
You know, if you had READ my response instead of getting pissy at what is obviously a really elaborate joke you might not come across as a jerk. It's not very heroic to piss and moan about who ISN'T available. Do you read Steve Rogers pissing and moaning that the Fantastic Four are off fighting Galactus? No. They cowboy up and soldier on.
You know, my first pass on this response was pretty thermonuclear and profanity ridden, but I'm going to take the high road and ask one FINAL time nicely for people to STOP asking why orphaned main characters don't take part in something. If Fey, or Tennyo or Jade show up in a story, take it as a gift, be grateful and enjoy and if they don't it's very simply because we didn't want to write them. Ok? Stop it. This is one of my buttons, stop pressing it.
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Two problems with that. First, sending something into the sun is non-trivial. While cheaper to do in the WU, it's still going to be an expensive undertaking in most cases. Second, most ways of sending something into the sun involve traveling at least the intervening 93 million miles, which takes a good bit of time. That's time during which a bad guy could intercept and steal Unhcegila's prison for whatever nefarious purpose. You can lessen that risk by sending guardians along to escort him, but that means a lot more expense along with occupying the time of the guardians, leaving their home communities with less protection.Otherself wrote: Anyway, I think I might have a mundane solution that might help getting rid of this particular Class X entity, Stuff it in a rocket and fire it in the Sun, while it was still a bigg ass snake demon popsicle it was too dangerous to do it, but while it is trapped inside the pocket dimension Mrs Carson created it might be safe enough to do. It might be worth a try.
Of course, if you have access to a warper or mage who can just teleport an object (without accompanying it) a good 93 million miles, you can bypass those objections. Assuming his prison can even be teleported in the first place.
But, then there's the question of what happens when Unhcegila dies. He's some big-time evil, and that kind of stuff isn't always as simple as "Just kill it and everything will be better!" We already saw that with how the heroes avoided killing his third child to deny him the ability to spawn three new snakes. It's entirely possible that killing Unhcegila would just cause him to be reborn again somewhere else, outside their control. Killing him is worth that risk when the alternative is letting him rampage unchecked, but now that he's under control, it has turned into an "If it ain't broke, don't fix it" type scenario.
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Arcanist Lupus wrote: Also, there's always a possibility that Snakey is straight up immortal (or at least can't be killed by the sun). In which case, while marinating in the sun won't be pleasant, there's a chance that after a couple thousand years Snakey will adapt to the environment. And now you have a giant evil snake that's capable of tapping into the most powerful energy source in the Solar System. Have fun!
Reminds me of SCP-682 + Catapult Into Sun Joke SCP...
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There are lots of ways that sun disposal could go horribly wrong, and the sun isn't something you want to take chances with no matter how unlikely they are.
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It seems that we are experiencing a failure in comunication, so I'll try to clear things up.E. E. Nalley wrote: You know, if you had READ my response instead of getting pissy at what is obviously a really elaborate joke you might not come across as a jerk. It's not very heroic to piss and moan about who ISN'T available. Do you read Steve Rogers pissing and moaning that the Fantastic Four are off fighting Galactus? No. They cowboy up and soldier on.
You know, my first pass on this response was pretty thermonuclear and profanity ridden, but I'm going to take the high road and ask one FINAL time nicely for people to STOP asking why orphaned main characters don't take part in something. If Fey, or Tennyo or Jade show up in a story, take it as a gift, be grateful and enjoy and if they don't it's very simply because we didn't want to write them. Ok? Stop it. This is one of my buttons, stop pressing it.
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First thing first, I was not pissy, I did get the joke, but I also found mildly annoying that you simply dismissed what I was saying, you din't address anything of what I said, you didn't even disagreed and explained why, hell, you could have just said that there were reasons for it to be that way but you couldn't tell to avoid spoilers, but you framed your response in a way that dismissed what I said as silly AND turned the attenction away from what I was trying to say. My reaction was "That's not the point".
I might have to apologize for the emote that I used, I was looking for something that rolls the eyes while frowning, I didn't find it so I tried to find the closest thing I could find, there aren't many options for negative emotions, there's sadness and anger, mere annoyance is not aviable. I debated a little if I should have used no emote or go for an hyperbole, I thought that there was no warm going for the latter, it would seem that I was wrong.
Now, considering your raction it seems that the point I was trying to make didn't come across right, so I'll try again:
At the time of the Five Fold Court there was High Magic, it was the bedrock of civilization and instrument of war, a war against an enemy that had magics that could cause the end of the world as we know it and for the most part did. Nowdays there is some magic but it's minor thing compared to the ancient times, there are evils sealed in cans and we have no way to seal them again if they get loose and the ancient enemy that caused the end of the world as we know it is coming back, good guys have flintlock pistols, bad guys are preparing orbital bombardment, the situation is bleak. Then comes the likes of the Kellith and the Starstalker, the Kellith being a friendly baby GOO that while might not be strong enough to face the bigger evils sealed in a can it can mop up lesser evils and prevent unsealing the worst cans, while the Starstalker was made to deal with the likes of Chtulhu, unlike the ancient civilization, which could only seal the evils away, this two entities can kill and consume them. That is HUGE, is a complete game changer, in the mystical arms race the current civilization is extremely weak, but it is handed the instruments to ensure its survival in the form of this two entities. That is my perception of the situation up to Gen 1 time.
Now what made me wonder is that so far I haven't seen even the faintest hint of the universe aknowledging this fact, that's all that I was saying. I didn't say "Why didn't Tennyo show up?", I said "I wonder why nobody seems to consider the potential that Tennyo might have had in situations like this". And no, I don't expect an aswer, I don't want spoilers, but since it leaves me with a question mark hanging over my head I thought I might say that this leaves me wondering, nothing else.
I don't want characters shoehorned into stories, Tennyo simply wasn't there, she wasn't aviable, she couldn't get there in time, amen. But can I at least wonder why the universe doesn't seem to aknowledge her existance and say that it confuses me?
And Tennyo or no Tennyo, my reaction to this:
was:"What?" Lady Astarte's poket dimension is a stronger can than the one it just broke out of, if it manages to break out of the new can do you want to entrust your safety to a better copy of the previous can can? It already proved to not be enough. Find a way to dispose that thing, fire it in the sun, if that pocket dimension might have bad interactions with the sun drop it on the surface of Mercury, if it gets loose it gets a close up of solar radiation unfiltered by any atmosphere, or maybe drop it inside Jupiter, let's see how it gets out of a gas giant, and if FTL is aviable consider dropping it in a black hole. No "hopefully with even stronger force fields and wards and cryo-chilling", somewhere were he can't go return to Earth from.The evil demon was sealed in a pocket dimension of Lady Astarte's creation, and thus control. From inside, it would be nearly impossible for Snakey to get out, and if he did manage, the spherical silver gateway would be sealed into a low level of the HPARC facility, this time hopefully with even stronger force fields and wards and cryo-chilling.
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Otherself wrote: I might have to apologize for the emote that I used, I was looking for something that rolls the eyes while frowning, I didn't find it so I tried to find the closest thing I could find, there aren't many options for negative emotions, there's sadness and anger, mere annoyance is not aviable. I debated a little if I should have used no emote or go for an hyperbole, I thought that there was no warm going for the latter, it would seem that I was wrong.
Yeah, since emotes are a primary indicator of emotion, accurate choice is important.
Note that we do have more emotes, they're just only discoverable from the PM Composer .
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First and foremost, these forums are designed SO people can ask questions and get clarification. This isn't just an ego stroking exercise for us. (But everybody loves a happy ending, am I right?

That said, I understand you were asking in universe why and (again in a somewhat coy fashion) I answered your question. The important bit was:
if Tennyo were alive and on Earth
Now, I made a joke because I was also answering your question in the meta way that is external to the universe. Starwolf ran into the Superman paradox and quit. There were other factors, but writing for a character as powerful as Fey or Tennyo can be hard to give them a challenge that won't wipe out everyone else. So you have in and out of "game" answers to your question. But if you're worried about a potential spoiler, then be careful what you ask because if we can answer it, we will.
And sometimes, like now, folks get more information than they might want.
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
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NONE of us want to try to write Tennyo. Not directly. I show her from time to time, but not as a POV or major character. The closest I'll do is like I did with Jade in Best Days part 3. I don't know of any author that's ready to write an orphaned character as POV.
Next, with regard to Tennyo. First, ask yourself how many people are aware of Tennyo? She was a rather large target for culties and others, so having her hidden is pretty important who would like to control her. Would you let the government know all the details about someone like that? I know that I sure wouldn't. (NO government is free of corruption; it's just the degree IMHO.)
Second, Tennyo's application of force is like performing an appendectomy with a shovel. Dirty, blunt shovel. She's pure force, but is learning finesse. How much control does she have of her 'demon-eating' power? Don't know. She doesn't get a lot of chance to exercise that particular skill. So what seems like finesse to her might mean only the Dakotas and Wyoming get nuked.
Third, there's the simple point of story-telling. What drama exists if any time a character gets in trouble, they simply call Fey or Tennyo (or even Ayla to bring in money) and -POOF- problem all solved. Where's the opportunity for character growth, for tense situations? I know for a fact that EE's post was made to emphasize how totally-lacking in drama the Tennyo Option would be. Amusing? Yes. Dramatic? No. Engaging for readers? Again, no.
In real life? Anyone who knew about Tennyo would consider whether it was a good idea or not. Depending on (again) how much control she has. In a story? Yes, it'd be possible, and if necessary to avoid the obvious 'big hammer' approach, I'll find McGuffins to keep the really heavy hitters out of play so MY characters can get some screen time. None of us like to write BORING. So understand that point, and if you have questions, try to phrase them a little more carefully. It's okay to ask, but let's not let them degenerate into nasty arguments.
(And if I'm the voice of sanity and reason, we're really in deep stuff.)
So, let's put that discussion to bed. We are all making good points here, and in the ... enthusiasm ... of the discussion, it seems that some points are being missed. Okay, I said what I need to. Done, finito, finished, terminado, am Ende, stick a fork in it, it'd be pushing up the daisies if it hadn't been nailed to the perch!
Now let's all join hands and sing Kum ba ...(thud - Stop it! Stop it! NOT like that! NO SINGING!!!)
Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
- JG
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Humans forget shit. People have fought entire battles with a pistol, knife or shotgun and only belatedly realized: my rifle was on my shoulder the whole time! It's possible to have a crisis that occupies your attention so totally that the only things you can think to bring to bear are what you have on-hand RIGHT NOW.
Do you know how to get ahold of the hammer?
Can they be there in time?
Do you even think of the hammer?
Gotta remember folks, that mutants are still humn, they make mistakes, they forget things.
So even if it wasn't important to the story for certain characters to have the spotlight, the characters don't have the omniscient understanding required to pull the optimal resources for all of the crisis points.
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elrodw wrote: I'm going to jump in, and hopefully this will be THE END of the 'talking past each other' and 'misunderstood emoticons'.
NONE of us want to try to write Tennyo. Not directly. I show her from time to time, but not as a POV or major character. The closest I'll do is like I did with Jade in Best Days part 3. I don't know of any author that's ready to write an orphaned character as POV.
Next, with regard to Tennyo. First, ask yourself how many people are aware of Tennyo? She was a rather large target for culties and others, so having her hidden is pretty important who would like to control her. Would you let the government know all the details about someone like that? I know that I sure wouldn't. (NO government is free of corruption; it's just the degree IMHO.)
On earth, Team Kimba, Chou, Sara, Mrs. Carson, perhaps Ty West, Kayda, and Circe. I really doubt anyone else knows. So how many of those were at the Snakey battle? Mrs. Carson and Kayda, neither of which had time to call for backup. The one time Kayda did have time to call for backup, she called Fey, so it's even doubtful she knows about Tennyo.
Second, Tennyo's application of force is like performing an appendectomy with a shovel. Dirty, blunt shovel. She's pure force, but is learning finesse. How much control does she have of her 'demon-eating' power? Don't know. She doesn't get a lot of chance to exercise that particular skill. So what seems like finesse to her might mean only the Dakotas and Wyoming get nuked.
Third, there's the simple point of story-telling. What drama exists if any time a character gets in trouble, they simply call Fey or Tennyo (or even Ayla to bring in money) and -POOF- problem all solved. Where's the opportunity for character growth, for tense situations? I know for a fact that EE's post was made to emphasize how totally-lacking in drama the Tennyo Option would be. Amusing? Yes. Dramatic? No. Engaging for readers? Again, no.
In real life? Anyone who knew about Tennyo would consider whether it was a good idea or not. Depending on (again) how much control she has. In a story? Yes, it'd be possible, and if necessary to avoid the obvious 'big hammer' approach, I'll find McGuffins to keep the really heavy hitters out of play so MY characters can get some screen time. None of us like to write BORING. So understand that point, and if you have questions, try to phrase them a little more carefully. It's okay to ask, but let's not let them degenerate into nasty arguments.
(And if I'm the voice of sanity and reason, we're really in deep stuff.)
So, let's put that discussion to bed. We are all making good points here, and in the ... enthusiasm ... of the discussion, it seems that some points are being missed. Okay, I said what I need to. Done, finito, finished, terminado, am Ende, stick a fork in it, it'd be pushing up the daisies if it hadn't been nailed to the perch!
Now let's all join hands and sing Kum ba ...(thud - Stop it! Stop it! NOT like that! NO SINGING!!!)
Since I kind of started this, I would like to make one thing clear. I neither expect, nor want to see a story starring Kayda, or Lanie, or Jericho, where they run into trouble and call "Superman" to solve their problem. I do expect them to act intelligently though.
The Book of Darwin wrote: The outcasts all stared at her like she’d gone insane, and then they moved. Jericho immediately called up his Rafe Armor, freshly connected to the new shield hanging off of its left arm, then engaged another trigger. Slapdash’s anti-tank Core-Ejector materialized in his right hand as he began calling the CB emergency Band. “Emergency, Darwin is under attack, I repeat Darwin is under attack. Dr. Reaper is materializing killbots over downtown.”
“Say again, there is no…”
“Shut up and get the word out, four minutes, tops and we’re going to have people dying. Get the Overwatch Defense team and every fucking soldier you can mobilized now!”
The first thing Jericho did was get armed and armored up, then he called for help. Ayla did a similar thing when fighting the Demon in California, Chou did the same thing for the meeting with the Chinese officials. Chaka nevers calls for help. Jadis did it when she called Dragonrider for help with Dragonblade. It does happen quite often in the stories. A lot of the time there isn't time to call for help, but when there is, I would expect people to call, especially professionals.
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Valentine wrote: On earth, Team Kimba, Chou, Sara, Mrs. Carson, perhaps Ty West, Kayda, and Circe. I really doubt anyone else knows. So how many of those were at the Snakey battle? Mrs. Carson and Kayda, neither of which had time to call for backup. The one time Kayda did have time to call for backup, she called Fey, so it's even doubtful she knows about Tennyo.
Nailed it. You don't call someone for backup if you don't KNOW that they can back you up. Kayda doesn't know. The only thing is that Wakan Tanka warned her that Billie had some important and dangerous thing about her. That's all she knows.
Valentine wrote: Since I kind of started this, I would like to make one thing clear. I neither expect, nor want to see a story starring Kayda, or Lanie, or Jericho, where they run into trouble and call "Superman" to solve their problem. I do expect them to act intelligently though.
Okay, I took a drink to calm down. Are you insinuating that Kayda DIDN'T act intelligently? This fight was a total surprise, and she did the best she could, trying to protect a lot of people and get the women out of danger. She did NOT have time.
"Um, Uncy?"
"Yeah?"
"Time out. I gotta call backup."
"WHAT?"
"Time out. I'm calling my backup. Also going to summon my extra fighting gear. Should only take a moment."
"Um - who says you can do that?"
"I called Time Out, that's why!"
Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
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That's just the type of person she is.
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elrodw wrote:
Valentine wrote: On earth, Team Kimba, Chou, Sara, Mrs. Carson, perhaps Ty West, Kayda, and Circe. I really doubt anyone else knows. So how many of those were at the Snakey battle? Mrs. Carson and Kayda, neither of which had time to call for backup. The one time Kayda did have time to call for backup, she called Fey, so it's even doubtful she knows about Tennyo.
Nailed it. You don't call someone for backup if you don't KNOW that they can back you up. Kayda doesn't know. The only thing is that Wakan Tanka warned her that Billie had some important and dangerous thing about her. That's all she knows.
Valentine wrote: Since I kind of started this, I would like to make one thing clear. I neither expect, nor want to see a story starring Kayda, or Lanie, or Jericho, where they run into trouble and call "Superman" to solve their problem. I do expect them to act intelligently though.
Okay, I took a drink to calm down. Are you insinuating that Kayda DIDN'T act intelligently? This fight was a total surprise, and she did the best she could, trying to protect a lot of people and get the women out of danger. She did NOT have time.
"Um, Uncy?"
"Yeah?"
"Time out. I gotta call backup."
"WHAT?"
"Time out. I'm calling my backup. Also going to summon my extra fighting gear. Should only take a moment."
"Um - who says you can do that?"
"I called Time Out, that's why!"
Nope, not implying that Kayda didn't act intelligently. Given the amount of time she had as warning, she acted highly intelligently. She made sure that everyone knew to run away and not look back. The SFL on the other hand should have tried to get backup. The knew and had time, even if no backup could arrive to save them, they would already be on the way to help with clean up (there was a nuke on the way) or to try to defeat Snakey.
Valentine wrote: Uncehgila finally got free, and it took a hell of a lot to stop him. This does bring up one thing that I have always disliked about comics and the way most of my friends run superhero games. When facing a potentially cataclysmic foe, why don't people call for support?
Kayda didn't have a chance, Lanie eventually did, but what was the SFL thinking? Admittedly none of the "nearby" teams, those in the Rockies, and Chicago area, are close enough to get there in time to help unless they have access to a teleporter, but if everything goes bad at least they are on the way. ARC has powered armor troops in orbit, presumably with the same sort of defenses as the HPARC armor had, but no one called them? Or Whateley? Someone is going to have clean the are, and it's likely to be ARC, with some help from Whateley.
From my first post on the subject.
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Valentine wrote:
elrodw wrote:
Valentine wrote: Since I kind of started this, I would like to make one thing clear. I neither expect, nor want to see a story starring Kayda, or Lanie, or Jericho, where they run into trouble and call "Superman" to solve their problem. I do expect them to act intelligently though.
Okay, I took a drink to calm down. Are you insinuating that Kayda DIDN'T act intelligently? This fight was a total surprise, and she did the best she could, trying to protect a lot of people and get the women out of danger. She did NOT have time.
"Um, Uncy?"
"Yeah?"
"Time out. I gotta call backup."
"WHAT?"
"Time out. I'm calling my backup. Also going to summon my extra fighting gear. Should only take a moment."
"Um - who says you can do that?"
"I called Time Out, that's why!"
Nope, not implying that Kayda didn't act intelligently. Given the amount of time she had as warning, she acted highly intelligently. She made sure that everyone knew to run away and not look back. The SFL on the other hand should have tried to get backup. The knew and had time, even if no backup could arrive to save them, they would already be on the way to help with clean up (there was a nuke on the way) or to try to defeat Snakey.
Valentine wrote: Uncehgila finally got free, and it took a hell of a lot to stop him. This does bring up one thing that I have always disliked about comics and the way most of my friends run superhero games. When facing a potentially cataclysmic foe, why don't people call for support?
Kayda didn't have a chance, Lanie eventually did, but what was the SFL thinking? Admittedly none of the "nearby" teams, those in the Rockies, and Chicago area, are close enough to get there in time to help unless they have access to a teleporter, but if everything goes bad at least they are on the way. ARC has powered armor troops in orbit, presumably with the same sort of defenses as the HPARC armor had, but no one called them? Or Whateley? Someone is going to have clean the are, and it's likely to be ARC, with some help from Whateley.
From my first post on the subject.
Ah, ok. I figured I'd try something amusing rather than launch, because I didn't think you would be insulting. And if my reply seemed snippy, then let me assure you that was not the way it was intended.
Humor - ar, ar
You assume that during the 35 minute flight, the SFL didn't try to get backup. There was a lot that wasn't shown or told, but perhaps I should have touched on this bit. They're pros - they would have called for any backup they could get. We don't know if the SD Air National Guard and Army National Guard had assets they were bringing, or if those were deliberately held back because of "Strangelove". Same for ARC resource - it's very likely they decided to NOT drop into what would be a very radioactive zone once Strangelove was activated.
BTW, I noticed that NO-ONE made any comment about the code word "Strangelove". I felt sure there would be some comments on that.
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I noticed it, but I'm extremely terrible at remembering my immediate reactions to stories unless I write them down.elrodw wrote: BTW, I noticed that NO-ONE made any comment about the code word "Strangelove". I felt sure there would be some comments on that.
It really is a good thing that I'm not allowed to make codewords. Every single one I made would be either an obscure reference or a bad pun. Probably both.
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elrodw wrote: Ah, ok. I figured I'd try something amusing rather than launch, because I didn't think you would be insulting. And if my reply seemed snippy, then let me assure you that was not the way it was intended.
Humor - ar, ar
You assume that during the 35 minute flight, the SFL didn't try to get backup. There was a lot that wasn't shown or told, but perhaps I should have touched on this bit. They're pros - they would have called for any backup they could get. We don't know if the SD Air National Guard and Army National Guard had assets they were bringing, or if those were deliberately held back because of "Strangelove". Same for ARC resource - it's very likely they decided to NOT drop into what would be a very radioactive zone once Strangelove was activated.
BTW, I noticed that NO-ONE made any comment about the code word "Strangelove". I felt sure there would be some comments on that.
Well, you mentioned Cornflower trying to call Kayda, you mentioned them calling the National Guard, I expected at least a mention of them trying to call others. About the National Guard, if Snakey tore up a Battalion, I didn't expect the SDNG to have much more in the way of assets to through at Snakey, and I certainly didn't expect the SFL to deliberately send more soldiers to die needlessly.
"Strangelove" is a fairly unique codeword, not much to get it confused about what you could mean, as opposed to "Bikini" or "Trinity." "Hiroshima" or "Nagasaki" would be a bit sick to use as codewords. "Oppenheimer" might not be bad.
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Oops, knew I forgot to mention something in my comments. Would it be a reference to the movie Dr. Strangelove or: How I Learned How To Stop Worrying and Love the Bomb. Heard of the movie but never saw it myself.elrodw wrote: BTW, I noticed that NO-ONE made any comment about the code word "Strangelove". I felt sure there would be some comments on that.
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As for Tennyo, if Norad C was any indication, then you clean up after a real throw-down Tennyo fight by nuking the place. And well, if you're going to have to nuke it anyway, then you might as well just nuke it in the first place. Rule of thumb: only call
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Dreamer wrote:
Oops, knew I forgot to mention something in my comments. Would it be a reference to the movie Dr. Strangelove or: How I Learned How To Stop Worrying and Love the Bomb. Heard of the movie but never saw it myself.elrodw wrote: BTW, I noticed that NO-ONE made any comment about the code word "Strangelove". I felt sure there would be some comments on that.
Huh. I think people didn't mention it because it was either a) too self-evident to require comment, or b) went totally over their heads. I would have guessed a as the primary reason, but comments on elrodw's comment suggest b is more common.
To anybody who hasn't seen the movie, it's very much worth watching.
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It's probably Murphy...isn't it?
edit: Oh wait, it would have to be someone else. Tansy wasn't at the meeting.
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Kettlekorn wrote: Rule of thumb: only call
GodzillaTennyo after the monster shrugs off your nukes.
And you've evacuated the planet.
Most important, never release Tennyo on the planet you keep your things on.
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Otherself wrote: I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities, why not have her on speed dial? (Is she traveling among the stars? Is she in another plane of existance?) The fact that she's a demoneater is known to Whateley Security, which means that Mrs Carson knows as well, CIA probably knows as well, I mean, why not call her? She can even teleport so as long as she's on the planet she can come to help at moment notice. What about using her (or Sara, if she's aviable) to dispose the Evil rather than just keeping it sealed in a can?
Katssun wrote:
Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]- Confirmation that Fey is alive (and well?) in 2016.
......
Actually that was confirmed in Islands In the Sun
Um, no. It wasn't. Just that someone was or is known as the Sidhe Queen.
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Yolandria wrote: My only guess about the code name.
Dr. Strangelove or: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love the Bomb
A couple of good quotes:
President Merkin Muffley: Gentlemen, you can't fight in here! This is the War Room.
General "Buck" Turgidson: Mr. President, we must not allow a mineshaft gap!
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Otherself wrote: I have been wondering a thing for a while: why there isn't the Tennyo option? She effing eates class X entities,
From memory, we only know that she seems to eat GOO's, not necessarily all class X's
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Katssun wrote: Honestly...Kayda is lucky she was able to go into battle clothed.
That's just the type of person she is.
No, That's the kind of author Elrodw is...

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Mister D wrote:
Katssun wrote: Honestly...Kayda is lucky she was able to go into battle clothed.
That's just the type of person she is.
No, That's the kind of author Elrodw is...
Naah, elrod was rather kind here, Kayda didn't end up dead before the fight even started.
Bad joke aside... That was really impressive. Excellent fireworks and conclusion for the story with Snakey, and offering some really powerfiul moments of emotion. Not really much more to say which wasn't already said, and I'm not sure I couuld really do it justice anyways. Now, as Bardue would say, why Tatanka wasn't summoned? Don't tell me Kayda is still operating by 'I must prove myself worthy by not using my spirit. Ever.' in 2011.
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When Tonka Trucka gets hurt and again when he dissipates, Kayda gets hurt too. It has been detrimental to the outcome of her fights so far. The after effects of him getting hurt could have killed her at a critical moment. Her shield spells are more reliable against that type of threat.Hardric wrote: Now, as Bardue would say, why Tatanka wasn't summoned? Don't tell me Kayda is still operating by 'I must prove myself worthy by not using my spirit. Ever.' in 2011.
Gunny is right, she should use him more, but his main benefit is to shred PK bricks who are overconfident in their durability. Snakey isn't relying on any PK, so she's better off just going for it, like she did.
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Katssun wrote:
When Tonka Trucka gets hurt and again when he dissipates, Kayda gets hurt too. It has been detrimental to the outcome of her fights so far. The after effects of him getting hurt could have killed her at a critical moment. Her shield spells are more reliable against that type of threat.Hardric wrote: Now, as Bardue would say, why Tatanka wasn't summoned? Don't tell me Kayda is still operating by 'I must prove myself worthy by not using my spirit. Ever.' in 2011.
Gunny is right, she should use him more, but his main benefit is to shred PK bricks who are overconfident in their durability. Snakey isn't relying on any PK, so she's better off just going for it, like she did.
Tatanka isn't very useful for most combat where she might want something as powerful as him, then... Anything she'd like his strength for, is more detrimental because of Painshare...
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So, Tatanka vs. Unhcegila would only make sense to me if Kayda was dying anyway and Tatanka's suicide run would buy time for the remainder of the team to regroup and win. I suspect that that would leave both Brandon/Kayda and Ptesanwi weakened for a few more turns around the Wheel, with Tatanka NOT coming back unless corrupted, so it would have to be a really, really good suicide run.
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Hardric wrote: Forgot about the Painshare thing, and didn't think about the other points. Sorry for the stupid question.
Not a stupid question. A stupid question would be why didn't Kayda send everyone to attack Snakey as canon fodder?
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lol the answer to that one would be because she is not jadeValentine wrote:
Hardric wrote: Forgot about the Painshare thing, and didn't think about the other points. Sorry for the stupid question.
Not a stupid question. A stupid question would be why didn't Kayda send everyone to attack Snakey as canon fodder?
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A deaging spell might be overpowered because it could be used to become immortal (I am 60, I deage myself back to 20, rinse and repeat, you have the potential of living forever), however it could have the catch that along with taking away years from the body it also takes away years from the mind, the memory, the experience, everything, like the past self had been transported foreward in time with no knowledge of what happened during the time skip. This (along with the difficulty of casting a such spell) would make make the spell's usefulness very limited in general, however in this specific case the drawback is inexistant as there are no memories to lose in first place.
This could also give the Bartons a daughter to love and raise if Vanessa's problem can't be solved.... or even if it can and does get solved.
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Otherself wrote: I was wondering, Card Trick got her mind wipe just like that kid had with Snakey Jr the First, isn't it possible to use magic to deage her? If she's going to relearn everything like an infant let her have a normal childhood at least.
A deaging spell might be overpowered because it could be used to become immortal (I am 60, I deage myself back to 20, rinse and repeat, you have the potential of living forever), however it could have the catch that along with taking away years from the body it also takes away years from the mind, the memory, the experience, everything, like the past self had been transported foreward in time with no knowledge of what happened during the time skip. This (along with the difficulty of casting a such spell) would make make the spell's usefulness very limited in general, however in this specific case the drawback is inexistant as there are no memories to lose in first place.
This could also give the Bartons a daughter to love and raise if Vanessa's problem can't be solved.... or even if it can and does get solved.
This might be the solution, actually, because there are youth spells, or other methods, given the number of 100+ year old mages about. Turning yourself back into a kid is usually an unwanted effect, so they likely just aren't given that much power, if could be used to do such things.
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If de-manifest would even she re-manifest and if so with the same powerset?
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annachie wrote: Assuming she could be de-aged back to babyhood, would she de-manifest or remain active?
If de-manifest would even she re-manifest and if so with the same powerset?
Well, now, that's an interesting set of questions to an interesting proposition.
I'd answer it if I had thought if this particular scenario ...

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For the record, I'm mostly bringing this up because I wanted to ask the question "Is it legal to turn people into babies?"

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And worse still...
*runs off to whisper sweet evils into Elrods ear.*
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JG wrote: This is also assuming that looking into Unceghilas gaze doesn't obliterate the brains ability to form cognitive and mnemonic connections entirely, leaving the body and mind dead husks with no hope of recovery to become a normal person again.
And worse still...
*runs off to whisper sweet evils into Elrods ear.*
With apologies to Roger Miller,
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elrodw wrote:
annachie wrote: Assuming she could be de-aged back to babyhood, would she de-manifest or remain active?
If de-manifest would even she re-manifest and if so with the same powerset?
Well, now, that's an interesting set of questions to an interesting proposition.
I'd answer it if I had thought if this particular scenario ...
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Well, the situation is akin to a comatose patient who is unable to give consent to medical procedures. In this case, Card Trick's next-of-kin or legal guardians would be the ones who would have to give consent.Arcanist Lupus wrote: Hm... What's the legality of turning people into babies without their express permission as a medical treatment?
For the record, I'm mostly bringing this up because I wanted to ask the question "Is it legal to turn people into babies?"
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Not that I'm planning anything, mind you ....


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elrodw wrote: You'd have to assume that Card Trick's parents would give consent. But what if, say, her dad had a heart attack or stroke from the stress of losing his little girl, and her mom basically lost it over losing the two of them? Then who would give consent?
Not that I'm planning anything, mind you ....
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Grandparents? Did Cardtrick have a living will? Brothers or sisters? Spouse? Perverted Uncle? Finally the State.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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And - what did y'all think of my first crude attempts at GIMP? I enjoyed making the medal - even though it was complicated and took many tries to get things just right. Even though Astrodragon claims it looks like a Russian medal (pbthhhhh!).
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Don't Drick and Drive.
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Otherself wrote:
A deaging spell might be overpowered because it could be used to become immortal (I am 60, I deage myself back to 20, rinse and repeat, you have the potential of living forever), however it could have the catch that along with taking away years from the body it also takes away years from the mind, the memory, the experience, everything, like the past self had been transported foreward in time with no knowledge of what happened during the time skip. This (along with the difficulty of casting a such spell) would make make the spell's usefulness very limited in general, however in this specific case the drawback is inexistant as there are no memories to lose in first place.
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Sooner or later the laws of magic would catch you!
Law One, also called Law of Balance or Rule of Reaction, states that for every action, no matter how small or unintentional, there is always a reaction of equal or greater intensity.
So those years come from some where? 200 innocent kids suddenly turn 90 and drop dead! Then you get hunted by other 'good' mages!
The Law of Cyclicality states that things work in cycles. They begin, they work their way to a mid-point, then they decline, and finally end
the spell works once or twice then fades quicker and quicker till you are casting it nearly daily to LIVE!
The Law of Nemesis states that when someone or something begins to advance a course of action, the Universe will bring up something or someone to oppose it.
you get older and the universe makes something to KILL you to balance out the scales
The Rule of the Essential Flaw states that nothing is perfect. It means that there is a weak spot in everything and that nothing anyone does is unbreakable. However the weak spot can be hard to find, especially in well constructed spells.
Soonner or later? you will goof and end up 2000 years old and dust!
The Rule of Three states that in mystical conflicts one side has three chances to attack the other before the Law of Balance takes full effect and makes further attacks a supremely bad idea until balance is restored.
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Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
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Look at Circe.
However its likely not easy.
Also, there is the big problem of keeping track of your memories, there is a limit to what you can store in the brain. Edit out too much (to give more space), and eventually you may as well have died.
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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1. Used by Circe and other "white" Wizards. A spell that prevents aging, but does not reverse it. The younger you figure out the spell the better.
2. Used by "black" Wizards. A spell, almost certainly blood magic, that will reverse aging.
3. A Mythos spell that that plays with age.
Or you could just borrow Mr. Bradbury's carousel.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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elrodw wrote: Or there's a devise which does the job without invoking the laws of magic and their sometimes-unpleasant side-effects...
Yeah, I saw that one! but didn't the Commander defeat Royal Paine and destroy the Pacifier?
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E. E. Nalley wrote:
elrodw wrote: Or there's a devise which does the job without invoking the laws of magic and their sometimes-unpleasant side-effects...
Yeah, I saw that one! but didn't the Commander defeat Royal Paine and destroy the Pacifier?
Glad to see I wasn't the only one thinking this

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lighttech wrote: Sooner or later the laws of magic would catch you!
Until the day you truly fsck things up so badly that the Universe washes its hands of you, and delivers you a non-refundable, non-transferable, one-way ticket to GOO-ville.
Circe probably knows a simple incantation that undoes one day of aging, for a given age, that only works once a day. By now, she may not even be aware that she's cast it before her morning coffee. Or there's enough Precedence behind it now that the aging subroutine call in her Pattern has been commented out.
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We shall see, Zur! We. Shall. See!!!!
Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
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elrodw wrote: There have been some notes about whether Card Trick gets healed. Remember that Kayda healed the two scouts who got mind-fried by number-1 son; basically, cleaning the taint so their brains could 'start over'. It's very likely that the same could be done for Card Trick, although Unhcy's taint is apt to be a bit stronger (a LOT stronger) than that of his sons, so ...
We shall see, Zur! We. Shall. See!!!!
I figured at some point she would attempt it, and if you wanted us to know it will show up in a story.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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...wait, this probably got asked before somewhere, but if Lainie was pregnant (with twins) in Summer 2011, shouldn't the twins be pushing five in Gen2, instead of seven as stated? Or is this her second pregnancy and she miscarried due to the battle?
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Sir Lee wrote: Practical Thread Necromancy for the win...
...wait, this probably got asked before somewhere, but if Lainie was pregnant (with twins) in Summer 2011, shouldn't the twins be pushing five in Gen2, instead of seven as stated? Or is this her second pregnancy and she miscarried due to the battle?
Nothing gets by you, Sir Lee!

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