Question How do you like it?
- E. E. Nalley
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For this thread, I'd like to have a conversation about frequency of publishing. We have all tried and, so far, have a great track record of something being here at least on Monday, for a while there we got to twice a week, but that brings up an interesting point. I've just started the story The Evil That Men Do and its three chapters (so far) have been broken into roughly 20 page chucks for each part. (That would be 20 standard paper pages of 8 1/2 inch by 11 inches and a rough word count of about ten thousand words, give or take.) Now, according to Wikipedia, this counts as a 'Novelette' which is longer than a short story, but shorter than a Novella. The range for the category Novelette is 7,500 to 17,499 words.
So, which would you prefer? What amounts to a 60K word novel once a quarter or three 'novelettes' once a month or so? Keeping in mind this is primarily for my own research, but I'm sure the other authors might be interested. So, thoughts?
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- Anne
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I believe, however that with the variety of viewpoints we are seeing that we should be able to put forward something that isn't too far ahead of our current timeline without causing problems for other authors. Of course I could be wrong!
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- annachie
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I prefer longer, but I know that isn't possible. I've also learned that 10k words is about the largest chunk of text that most people will read.
Of course in saying that I should admit that the longest story I've published was under 3k

- Katssun
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The smaller parts equate more to the serial novels of the past (Dickens) or the serials of the sci-fi magazines (Amazing or Analog). Which means more and more frequent chances for us to astound you with our lack of attention to details!
And just like the authors of the Gernsback era, nobody is paying you!
- marie7342231
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I listen to stories via a text-to-speech app during my commute so I run out within a day or so. I would LOVE longer content on each Monday but if that is not sustainable, let's stay with the status quo.
One struggle I've had: A story chapter is published usually once/week with several stories competing for the same space. It come be week at a time or possible months between sections. The six chapters of Vegas baby Vegas, for example, were published between 10/3/17 and 12/11/17. That two month span is actually pretty good for a serial. Some of the Gen 2 stories have had months between chapters (see Eisenmädel 1, Rises the Sun, and A Dragon Abroad).
To be clear: I do not pretend to understand author timelines. Is the material sitting in the hopper ready for distribution or are we just staying a few weeks ahead as things are being written. I don't know and my point is not to complain about authors' rate of production. It is difficult to stay with each story when there are weeks or months between chapters and to answer EE's question, I would rather have them all at once so I can digest the story and not need to reread earlier chapters to recall the tale (see Hunger).
I hope this makes sense and does not come off as churlish. I am beyond grateful for each of the authors and the leadership team for guiding us through this incredible universe.
- Astrodragon
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All my parts are around 20k. Now I can release them in halves, sure, but I also want them out in front of people fairly quickly.
We writers are attention - seekers. Without it we get all depressed and join Bek's muse in the bar, which is never a good thing.
And long story arcs are a big problem (pun sorta intended). My next Morgana story arc is looking like 4x20k parts, or 8 parts if we look at 10k stories.
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- annachie
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In saying 10k chunks, I should have added that Whateley does tend to break that rule. It was something that was talked about on various fanfic type sites, oh over 10 years ago now.
You still see it at places like bigcloset et al.
I do wonder if Kristen spots differences in the stats that can track to the length of the release.
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- Cryptic
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- Dreamer
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- Kristin Darken
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A fairly voracious reader, someone reading a novel per week, isn't going to find 'all' their reading material filled by our ongoing output, as a 20k release once per week is only 20-25% of a novel. During our more aggressive release schedule at 3 items per week, we were hitting 50-75k words per week... which isn't quite a novel per week, but its between 2-3 per month. And at the 50 books per year pace, it would take someone dedicated to reading through the canon collection close to 2.5 years. Trying to catch up on the collection while reading everything new during a 3/wk schedule? Would take around 7 years.
So... understand that we aren't talking about average readers when we get into a conversation like this. Average readers... people who read fewer than 10 novels in a year... aren't even keeping up with a 20k word per release by reading everything we post. They're reading 1 in 3 of those, only the First Gen or only the Second Gen... or only stories about specific characters. We're talking about the hardcore reader who makes even the aggressive, voracious reader look like a slowpoke. And like designing video game end content around how fast the hardcore progression guilds can defeat it... it's close to impossible to build a model that is 100% successful based on that extreme demand.
From a site admin perspective, I can tell you that the site is far healthier (visitor wise) when we are consistent. Erratic releases result (and you can compare this with the strength of support and popularity of hundreds of web comics and fiction sites) in poor visitation. It doesn't matter how much people love a story/comic, but if you are erratic in your releases, visitors will simply put you on a once per month use and visit just long enough to see what you did that month and then move on to their other content providers. This mentality actually gets worse as people get used to 'binge watching' ...
I can tell you from practical observation of statistics that this site received FAR more visits when we were releasing regular on Monday/Friday than is accounted for by having people come two days instead of one (ie the increase was more than double). In theory, the more frequent visits result in more communication between readers because of the likelihood of people being present to converse, instead of making a post that might get responded to by the next time you are on. Feedback amounts increase as a result of a more active community.
A good example would be the difference between activity and community here vs Bigcloset. If you look at it, on the surface, BCTS gets 5-7 new content posts each day. And members make blog posts and discuss things in feedback. But in actually amount of content posted? Most of the BCTS daily content is 1k word segments of stories... not even enough to count as chapters. It takes 20 of them to match the average 20k word WU weekly release. So when we were pushing two or three releases per week, we were actually matching them for content output. The difference being, we were doing it on two days. Not spread out over the week (and that's without including the WhatIF content, which is not insignificant).
So, really, more releases is a benefit when it comes to growing and sustaining an active health community. Giving people a reason to drop by the site and see what's new... on the forums, in discussions and feedback... by itself is helpful, but new content is still a big factor. Having larger less frequent or unscheduled content releases... will be harder to keep a community together for. And if you want feedback? You have to have a community that is comfortable giving it.
As far as ideal length of each piece.... common wisdom is about 3k words for a chapter. But for episodic, its less specific. Still, I didn't some research with web serial stuff online and found that releases range from 15-30k, most at 15k or 20k. This is a long enough amount to feel like you can get in, get some character development or plot advancement, large enough to avoid reading like a chapter (with its limitations of one setting or perspective) while also being short enough to not begin to feel like each part is a novella and should be 'finished' start to end. Also, for pricing, this size makes some sense - an $8-9 book split four to six ways is a $1.50 to $2 serial price.
Also, one additional question to answer as it came up along the way... we try to keep a few stories in the pipeline because its easier on the editorial and publishing end not to have to go "Ok, its Sunday, we need a story for tomorrow's release" and to have someone that's 'mostly' ready at us to clean up and get ready to go out the door. We've done that. It's mostly gone unnoticed, so we got away with it.. but none of US felt like it was the right thing to do... we take pride in producing the quality of stories that we do. The last thing we want to do is be in a situation where we're pushing drafts out the door because they're the only thing available to go to keep up with a schedule that is releasing too much too quickly. On the other hand, we WANT the stories to keep moving and to get feedback on the things that are done. That's why we have implemented a 2 per week or even 3 per week release schedule at times.
When we have enough in the pipeline to do that, what we're saying is "IF we continue releasing 1 per week, we will have more than 10-12 items in the pipeline, enough for three months". At that point, we start to add a second release on say alternating weeks. if we get to the point where the scheduled pipeline has 20-24 stories in it (enough for three months at 2 per week), we add the third release. And the reverse is true as the pipeline diminishes. If we get down to twelve pieces left, we're not going to keep releases three per week... we'll diminish our output and ensure that we can still release something each week for a couple months while new material is being worked on. That's necessary because the time it takes to finish stories is flexible... we had a huge backlog of things when E.E. was unwell and Elrod got attacked by a rabid hurricane. Since then, we've had to drop down to a slower release cycle... but we sustained a regular output of stories despite nothing new getting written for a month or more there...
And keep in mind that its uncommon that an author comes to the table with multiple parts of a story already done. They've got part one ready for some reviews... part two is partly written, and part three to whatever are still just notes and outline. so its not an option to run five parts of said story back to back for convenience in reading. It's also going to cause problems if we have three authors come to the table with multiple part stories and we want to run all of author A's parts before getting to author B's story. If we did that back in Diane's day, we'd have had a 20 part ayla story controlling the release cycle until we finally got around to letting something else out. Mainly, cycling through lets everyone get some feedback (which, like coffee and scotch, keeps the words flowing)... and its important when you remember that not every reader is reading every story.
At the same time, we try not to have too much time between parts of a story... but let's face it, most of us aren't writing a novel a month... so a three or four part story isn't going to come together in a month so you can read it as it comes together. We only stay ahead of voracious readers because there's a group of us. Even then, the fastest readers are always going to consume content faster than we can produce it. The size or timing of the releases isn't ultimately going to change that directly. Indirectly though? Having a bigger, more active community is the best way to result in more WhatIF and, as an outcome, more canon authors. And more people writing quality stories could, in theory, outpace even the fastest readers. Especially if we ended up with some big money backers and could lure the authors to spend more time writing and less on silly things like working for a living.

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- Ametros
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So I guess overall I probably prefer 20-30k bites, but I'm certainly not averse to anybody dumping 80k words down at a time if you feel it's best.

Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
- Valentine
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Every Monday is good, with whatever the author is comfortable with. Having said that, I would prefer two parts over two weeks, than a long part and then nothing the next week.
We are not paying the authors, so they should do what is comfy for them.
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- Anne
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- Sir Lee
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- Is it best to post large stories all at once, or it's best to post them piecemeal?
- What's a "good size" for a weekly Whateley installment?
- How long an interval between chapters is acceptable?
(Probably a few other questions that I'm not articulating right now,)
Let me tackle them in order:
1. Posting chapters:
PRO: generally speaking, chapters bring more engagement. You have more releases, more opportunities to discuss... and the readers get those chapters sooner. Also, in a shared universe such as Whateley, it opens the possibility of two or more authors collaborating by writing parallel narratives, showing different PoVs of the same events without the first one to publish becoming a huge spoiler for the others. Publishing in chapters also affords the author the opportunity for mid-story cliffhangers.
CON: from the reader's POV, there's the risk of the story being interrupted in the middle for whatever reason. Also, even when there's a reasonable expectation that the story will be finished in a timely fashion, I find that keeping track of many partial stories is hard. For that reason, I tend to wait for the final chapter in many cases. However, despite this having happened a few times in the past I don't think this is a problem for Whateley in general -- even unfinished stories advance the universe narrative as a whole, and are not therefore "wasted time." Let me illustrate with an example: Morpheus is posting a new non-Whateley story on his mailist and BC at the moment, and he also has just posted a new Glyph chapter here. It's the same author, with the same good track record of finishing what he begins. But I'm waiting for the non-Whateley story to be finished before tackling it, while I'm going to read Glyph 3 Chapter 1 tonight. That's because I already know the setting and characters for Glyph, so there's hardly anything new to "keep track" in this story -- while in the BC story, it's all new information I have to keep track of.
So, on balance, I'm for posting in chapters.
2. "Good size" for publishing chunks.
I don't really think in terms of "words" (which I find a somewhat archaic and arbitrary unit of measure), but rather in total character count (yes, including spaces and such), which is really easy and fairly well-defined nowadays. But I'm told that a "word" in English is assumed to be equivalent to 5 characters (including spaces) on average. So, if you really want to get my opinion in "words", just divide by 5.
I find that a weekly chunk in the 60-120 kb range (which most Whateley releases fall into) feels very satisfactory. Much lower than that (say, less than 40 kb) let me feeling slightly shortchanged for the week, like maybe there should another vignette released together with that one to make up for it. A full novel (over 200 kb) released all at once is not really reason for complaint, but, well, it's unnecessary -- splitting it in two or three chunks might have help to manage the queue.
Which leads me to topic 3... posting interval between chapters.
Ideal chunk size is affected by reader familiarity, and that is affected by release frequency. And I mean release frequency for that particular story, not Whateley in general. The shorter the chapters, the closer and more regularly they should be posted. Consider that the reader is not able to enjoy the beginning of the chapter as much because they are simultaneously trying to remember what was happening in the previous chapter. The longer the interval, the longer this "on-ramp" part of the reading experience will be. You really don't want the "on-ramp" to take most of the story. So, you can get away with small chapters... IF you release frequently, and predictably. That's how many authors in BC and TTH manage to keep good readerships despite the shortness of their chapters.
(Predictability of releases can offset the problem a bit -- if the reader knows for a fact that Bek will release a new chapter of Silver Ghost next Monday, they might take the time to reread the last story beforehand to refresh the memory. But only a few readers will do that, so the offsetting effect is small)
Overall, I would like if stories posted chapterwise could manage some regularity and not-too-large intervals. I don't mean to only start posting another story after finishing all the chapters of the current story -- but, say, one chapter every three weeks at most would be nice, Yeah, I know there are always unplanned factors, but that does not seem to be an unreasonable goal to strive for. It does happen more often than not currently, but it feels to be... well, more of a case of stuff falling together than a directed effort.
- Mister D
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From my perspective as a creative artist, who wants to produce great works, then releasing things when they are right is better, so i would say publish when you feel that you have something worth publishing.
From the perspective of being someone who enjoys reading all of this great free entertainment, "More Of Everything! Now!", would be good, but we won't mind if we have to wait.
Do things as YOU all choose to do them, so that you are happy with how you are working, and happy with what you are creating.
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- annachie
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Friday/Saturday can be whatever, so can a second Monday story if you're doing them.
Other than that, bigger is better, but it gets harder to read on the phone.
- Rose Bunny
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- Kristin Darken
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Rose Bunny wrote: MY Ideal, I think would be Monday being a Gen 1 story every week, Gen 2 every Friday, with occasional misc. stories on Wednesday, thinkgs like Non-Whateley, or Gen 0... but I know that's not really practical or realistic.
Ya.. we've discussed doing something like this, but it all goes out the window when we've got 8 things in the queue and they're all gen 1. or they're all gen 2, etc. Could we do a Monday Gen 1, Weds Gen 2, Fri Library release and never stray from that, even if it means that if there is nothing of that type available that that day goes without? Yes... technically we could. But that might also result in having three months of stories in the pipeline getting no feedback while two potential release days go empty.
It typically takes 8-12 active writers to sustain a 20k word per week release cycle (where each author releases, on average, a new segment each 3 months (a novel per year). A fast writer like Elrod, Morpheus or Diane will do several times more... and E.E. has done 2-3 times normal also, when he's feeling well and he's getting good feedback and morale support.
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- Katssun
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But this doesn't take into account of writers block, lack of motivation, personal issues, or just plain not feeling it.Sir Lee wrote: Which leads me to topic 3... posting interval between chapters.
Ideal chunk size is affected by reader familiarity, and that is affected by release frequency. And I mean release frequency for that particular story, not Whateley in general. The shorter the chapters, the closer and more regularly they should be posted. Consider that the reader is not able to enjoy the beginning of the chapter as much because they are simultaneously trying to remember what was happening in the previous chapter. The longer the interval, the longer this "on-ramp" part of the reading experience will be. You really don't want the "on-ramp" to take most of the story.
That said, as a testament to the WU authors, they're really good at the on-ramping. I might forget a particular side character here and there, but most of the canon authors slip back into their writing so seamlessly I'm kind of taken aback. Professional writers give me more trouble sometimes, and they can be releasing yearly or even more frequently.
There's WU canon authors who go significantly longer time periods between characters and story chunks and it just comes back to me in an instant, or it is teased back out in a natural manner to the point that I don't need to go back and read the previous segment.
- Astrodragon
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If you want us to write more, and more frequently, comment more.
Authors are greedy for comments and feedback, the more we get the more we write
(we grind it up and let our muses mainline it...)
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
- elrodw
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Astrodragon wrote: One thing to point out.
If you want us to write more, and more frequently, comment more.
Authors are greedy for comments and feedback, the more we get the more we write
(we grind it up and let our muses mainline it...)
Normally, yes. But with the ongoing, agonizing flood rebuilding, my muse is too busy sitting in the corner sucking her thumb and whimpering (when she's not sneezing and coughing from allergies from the unfinished inside of the house).
But yeah, muses eat comments like candy.
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- Anne
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- Kristin Darken
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elrodw wrote:
Astrodragon wrote: One thing to point out.
If you want us to write more, and more frequently, comment more.
Authors are greedy for comments and feedback, the more we get the more we write
(we grind it up and let our muses mainline it...)
Normally, yes. But with the ongoing, agonizing flood rebuilding, my muse is too busy sitting in the corner sucking her thumb and whimpering (when she's not sneezing and coughing from allergies from the unfinished inside of the house).
But yeah, muses eat comments like candy.
Sounds like we need to get you and your muse over to a spa in New Mexico for a de-tox cleanse.
Fate guard you and grant you a Light to brighten your Way.